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PostSubject: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 08, 2009 12:07 pm

Undesirable

They met, they fell in love and lived happily ever after; a basic ending and beginning most books, ff's and etc have, however when fate brought these two together, they met and instantly knew the other was 'undesirable' one small look at her was enough to keep the guys away, no one wanted anything to do with her - whether it be boys or girls - but they stayed away for fear of popularity loss.


At the age of sixteen and looking how she looked there was no way she would meet her prince charming with constant rude remarks about her appearance. For five constant years she dealt with this problem, until one day she was forced to compare herself with the others, the constant remarks from one person forced her to change herself; will they ever meet again, will they fall in love and have a happily ever after??? Something to read this ff for!J

i hope you liked the prologue - and yes for those of you who are AK fans this is a AK ff....happy reading and please do let me know whether i should continue or not and please comment/criticize/suggest

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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:38 pm

heyy!!!!
AK!!!
wow...ohh i miss dem!!!

da prologue is amazingg!
do continue asap!!
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:23 am

very nicely written sukhi..
i really liked reading it..
continue soon ok :-bd
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:29 am

cont soon sukhi
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:33 am

awesome FF!
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:52 pm

Chapter 1:

"Uff Kripa! Get up it's time to get to school, you'll get late my gulabo!" Gayatri hissed. "Let me sleep mom can't you let me go to school tomorrow!" a sleepy Kripa whined back. "no means no!" Gayatri screamed back and turned her attention towards a laughing Suryaban. "what is there for breakfast or are you
saving that for your gulabo?" he snickered as Gayatri through him a glare.

Back upstairs, a tired Kripa dragged herself out of bed and towards the bathroom, walking out half an hour later dressed in loose jeans, and a shirt. "Ugh still the same ugly as yesterday!" she mumbled and walked down the stairs. "Hey sis!
Good morning!" Karan mumbled politely and moved over to the next seat to make room for Kripa. "Here Kripa, make sure you finish all of it!" Gayatri ordered. Kripa merely nodded and turned her attention back towards the eight paranthe Gayatri had just placed on her plate. "whatever happened about dieting?" Suryaban snickered from behind the newspaper. Kripa glanced up at him, once again insulted by the constant nagging marks from her parents.

"I'm getting late Mom I'll be home by four! Bye love you! And hate you dad!" Kripa mumbled as she jogged towards the door.

At the young age of sixteen Kripa was not like 'normal' teens, she was constantly ignored and insulted because of her appearance. Since the age of ten something happened in her life that ruined her completely, her self esteem dropped as she took in glances of her appearances day by day through the eyes of society. But little did she know her life was soon going to change for the worse.


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"oye Angad look at that man, I think she entered the wrong school!" Josh snickered glancing at a shy new student standing by the school gate. Angad turned around hoping to find a sexci looking girl but instead spit out his soda. "what the hell? Did she not read the sign NO FAT PEOPLE ALLOWED!" Angad spat. Prithivi nodded, "or girls weighing more than 65 kilos!" Josh grinned, "she looks new let's have some fun!" Angad nodded and made his way towards her.

"Hey beautiful!" Angad called out towards shy Kripa. She glanced at him surprised, blinked her eyes twice and turned behind herself and back again. "are you talking to me?" she spoke a bit squeaky. Angad chuckled, "nahin I'm talking to casper!" Kripa smiled shyly and glanced at him; dressed in ripped
jeans and a black shirt, boy did he look handsome as ever. Angad caught her gaze on him and immediately flinched away. "nice shirt!" he snickered. Kripa blushed and glanced at her oversized shirt, something she always did to hide away some of her weight. It worked and other times it didn't. "can I help you?" Kripa asked politely. Angad stared dumbfounded as he stared at her face.

Seconds later he found his voice, "yeah by not shaking the earth!" he burst out laughing. Josh and Prithivi followed his lead and watched as Kripa ran away hurt.


*****

"Hey is he here yet?" Josh asked the several inches shorter Prithivi. "Nope not yet, he'll be here in five minutes in the meantime, look at that fireball!" he snickered and turned his gaze behind Josh. "damn boy look at that figure!" he laughed. "this one is mine you can have her once I am done!"

"how about not Prithivi! And Josh your supposed to save her for me!" a husky voice spoke from behind them. Both turned surprised at his entry, "when the heck did you get here, and oye I saw her first; she is damn fine! Boy does daddy want a piece of that!" Josh snickered with the rest. "watch me do my thang!" Prithivi laughed and headed towards the girl. "Yaar Angad do you think he can do it?" Josh asked. Angad chuckled and nodded negatively. "he's not a man yet!" both laughed and watched carefully as Prithivi headed towards the girl. Instead of a kiss or a hug, he walked back towards them a hand on his red cheek.

"Watch me do my thang!" Angad repeated Prithivi's words. Prithivi shot him a glare and all turned their heads back towards the lunchroom. "let's get some food I'm hungry, what else are we supposed to do for lunch! Hopefully the moti wont eat all of it!"


Alright so thats part 1, but things will get better, and you can see a sneak preview in kdmhmd forum. i put up a romantic part an changed the names. Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:48 am

koool
bt yaar poor kripa Sad((((
khair updt nxt part asap!!!!
y did u make kripa lyk dat Sad
hehe bt its FAB!!
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:31 pm

good start
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:47 pm

hii great work
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:05 pm

aww dont worry reeno, things get better for kripa after part 12! Happy i promise!
thanx nitya and prii! posting the next part up right now Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 15, 2009 1:07 pm

Chapter 2:

In the back of the cafeteria, sat a lonely Kripa eating nothing for fear of finding herself in another 'attack' Quickly she glanced around the cafeteria staring at it for perhaps the last time in her life, she had managed to switch schools instantly and this would be her sixth school for the year where someone had forced her to switch out. In another calm movement, Kripa pulled out her book and began reading 'The Notebook' a story she loved deeply, something that had a certain magic to it, she sighed dreaming about a similar love story in her life but in reality everyone shied away from her as if she were a monster ready to attack. She groaned silently and continued on reading. Meanwhile Angad, Josh and Prithivi entered the room sniggering and passing remarks about the hot girls or of the new 'moti' in town aka 'Kripa Sharma'

"hey excuse us, make way please, uff moti move out of the way!" Prithivi screamed, trying to find room to get around her. She looked away he was ten feet away from her and had managed to pass of something so cheap and disgusting. Josh and Angad burst out laughing and watched as Kripa repeatedly rolled her eyes daring up the courage to sit still and read. "Moti aren't you hungry today? Won't you eat anything - oh I see you are saving all the food so everyone can eat and not only you! How sweet of you but if you intend to do that do NOT eat the book!" he snickered and tossed a high five towards Angad. Kripa glanced at him with pain in her eyes, he stared back slightly confused and in the next moment passed something she never wanted to hear. "Oye elephant! How do your parents afford to keep a house and feed you, if I had a sibling like you, boy would we go bankrupt in an hour and all the struggles going to one place looking for the right clothes and the next to order your type of dish. What kind?" Angad asked turning around to glance at Prithivi and Josh who just shrugged, "the fat kind!" the trio sniggered away hooting around the table where Kripa sat with tears rushing down her eyes, thinking and pondering when would all of this stop? First it had only been her parents and now the entire world was mocking her.

As the trio walked away and headed towards the front of the lunch line easily cutting those who waited for several minutes hoping to get their food; two students sat down on the other end of the table where Kripa sat alone wiping away her tears. Mustering up some courage she glanced at them and mumbled a cheery "hi! My name is Kripa and who are you?" she questioned. They stared at her dumbfounded and looked around the room noticing everything had suddenly gotten quieter. "I can't believe she just talked to us, look now everyone is staring!" the younger chubby looking girl gasped. While the other stared at Kripa and said, "oh you forgot in your introduction your fat! And who I am I am skinny if that's what you are asking!" she mumbled, grabbed her bag and walked away from her lunch table shaking her head in disgust at Kripa. "don't know where these fat people come from -- they should have a special school for them where they can serve more than one person!" the chubbier one remarked walking away her head held high as she brought Kripa's self esteem lower.

Kripa glanced around once again at those sitting nearby, she was an outsider no one wanted anything to do with! A nobody with no identity at this school just a fat and overweight person was how her emotions and feelings were depicted. The tears rushed down with fury and in an instant she snapped up and ran out of the hall after hearing someone scream, "earthquake save us!" that was more than enough for a day. And with that she ran through the closed doors of the cafeteria and out towards the field settling nearby a tree whom she managed to call her own. "this school year is going to be worse!" she mumbled to herself realizing her parents were not going to allow another move.
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"Aye do you have any classes with the moti?" Angad questioned Josh who stared back stumped and nodded negatively. "Darn this year would have been much more exciting if she was in one of our classes!" Angad muttered before glancing towards his car where Kripa stood waiting for a ride. "this is it!" Angad smirked, "let's get going!" Josh snickered "peace at last! Who know school could be so fun!" both laughed and headed towards Angad's car. "excuse me moti move away from the car your sending fat vibes to it, it's going to explode!" Josh broke out in to fits, while Angad just shook his head he had a better idea. "Kripa?" Angad called out to her huskily. Kripa turned to look at him trying not to appear rude, "yes how may I help you?" she asked innocently once again and manage to stump him in seconds.

Several moments later Angad found his voice, "would you like a car ride home?" he asked fluttering his eyelashes shyly. Kripa smiled, "no thank you!" she mumbled and looked away. This time both Josh and Angad glanced at one another, "did a moti just turn you down, not once have you ever been turned down!" Josh spoke startled. Boy was this a hot topic for this weeks high school newsletter. "shut up Josh!" Angad growled and looked towards Kripa again, "Kripa ji, would you please just get in, we can drop you off at home!" Angad asked for the twentieth time. After twenty minutes Kripa eventually realized she wasn't going to find her mother's car anywhere nearby to pick her up. Sighing she turned to walk away when she heard Angad ask again. Taking in the long distance to walk and his car, she accepted and moved towards his car. "OYE what the heck do you think your doing?" Angad snapped, glancing at her. Kripa startled looked up, "you just asked if I wanted a ride, and I accept!" she smiled sweetly at him. Angad snorted, "humph did you really think I was going to give you a ride and aye don't get in, my car's tires will just get a puncture as soon as you sit in, or my seat will tear to shreds and my beautiful red mustang will break apart the second your foot steps in. Now back away from the car I have places to be and go!"

Kripa watched him drive out of school premises with teary eyes, on her first day of school she managed to make everyone hate her and that too with no crime! She wiped her tears away and decided on walking the three miles back home after realizing the bus was long and gone! Hopefully tomorrow will be a better day, she thought optimistically and walked off.
*****

"How was your first day at school gulabo?" Gayatri asked as Kripa walked in through the door. "it was great!" Kripa replied sourly, and glanced towards the T.V. hoping to find her favorite show on, but awkwardly enough it was her father lying across the couch watching "Deal or No Deal!" Sighing she began trudging up the stairs when Gayatri called her down again, "gulabo it's time for dinner!" Kripa sighed and turned back around heading towards the dining room where she sat quietly as Gayatri gave her half the food with a smirk on her face. From the other end of the table she watched as Suryaban shook with laughter. No one understood her, the only person who did was Karan but at the moment he wasn't here. She sighed and glanced towards her mother, "ma how come you didn't come and pick me up from school today?" she asked, pain crossing her face as she recalled the day's hideous events. Suryaban roared with laughter at another "inside" joke and spoke, "we thought it was about time you started burning off those extra hundred thousand calories you have on you!" he roared with laughter once again saw Gayatri smile slightly. "and we saved a trip from having to get the car tilted to the same level!" he chuckled wiping away the tears from his eyes yet his eyes sparkled with amusement.

Kripa watched them both hurt, and without touching her food walked up the stairs, crying silently towards her room. Suryaban and Gayatri watched with amusement and surprise to find her not eating away. Back upstairs Kripa pounded her punching bag hitting the bag until her knuckles no longer could feel the blood drizzling down her chubby fingers. "who cares what I do? No body gives a damn about me -- the only thing anyone can see is your appearance!" she mumbled to her teddy bear, someone with whom she spilled her heart's content too. "I didn't even eat today, skipped lunch and dinner, but does it matter? Nope! Maybe it wont be a crime any longer to be fat…" she mumbled the last bit finding a new rush of tears in her eyes.

Thank you so much everyone once again for the comments, and as I said earlier I sincerely hope I am not hurting or offending anyone's feelings. This story is written so others may people from the inside rather than the outside. As always - sukhi

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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:18 pm

Awesome..!!

But di, i feel that I've read this before..Have u posted it on some other site too?
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:44 pm

yeap yeap hun. i wrote it on i-f; im currently on part 34. just thought i might share my favorite ff thus far, here as well Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:26 am

heyy sukhii!!!
arey awesum part yaar,,
da way ur wid emotionz nd how kripa feels nd all!!...
soo nyc...
bt yaar...i feel so sorry fr kripa!!! Sad((
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Mon Mar 16, 2009 9:42 am

lovely going enjoyed reading
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:26 am

woahh awesoem update
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:45 pm

Chapter 3:

The next morning Kripa awoke with a pounding pain in her heart, she gasped it was the same painful pain she had felt every few months. Abruptly she jumped to her feet and rushed towards the bathroom trying to stop the heart pain but nothing. Having not told her doctor or her family members about the pain she knew she couldn't do anything, and merely passed it off as another thing that doesn't want her living. With a sigh she jumped into the shower, and walked out several minutes later dressed in slightly loose jeans and a shirt, something that abruptly made her look skinnier. On her favorite show the day before she realized if you were clothes your size you do look skinnier and it worked for her, perhaps today the second day of school she would not have to deal with the pain and rejection she had felt.

"Good morning bhaiyya!" Kripa cheerfully greeted her loving brother, who she deeply respected from the bottom of her heart. "Good morning sweetheart, how are you feeling now?" Karan asked worried. Kripa glanced at herself and back at him, "I am completely fine!" she muttered looking away from his eyes. "is that so, then how come last night when I came to check up on you I found your knuckles bleeding! I know for sure something happened yesterday because you only use the punching bag when something hurts you deeply and this morning you looked as if you were in pain!" he spoke the anxiety increasing in him every second as he thought about the horror she must have felt once again on her first day of her school. At age sixteen she was killing her insides by not eating, unleashing her anger until she didn't bleed and was mentally dying day by day. "Oh my…! I'm so sorry I wasn't here yesterday, I had an important meeting and couldn't come!" Karan mumbled pain crossing his face, the one person he loved more than anything in his life was his sister. He couldn't see her in pain and only he knew how much pain he went through seeing her devastated.

"it's okay bhai!" Kripa smiled looking away from his eyes and blinked several times to clear out her misty eyes. "do you want me to join you today at school as a visitor?" Karan asked worried. Kripa shook her head, she didn't want her brother to see how much she went through one day, and she definitely could not see her twenty-one year old brother taking another day off from work just to protect her from the outside world when both knew he would not always be there. She came out of her thoughts when Gayatri dumped another few plates of breakfast in front of her, this time fed up with her mother Kripa moved all the plates away, and walked out the door after kissing Karan on the cheek. "I'll talk to you later bhai, have a nice day!" she said cheerfully and rushed out the door, already deciding to walk however many miles it was to school. There was no point in expecting anything from her parents but she still did. Deep down she wandered if they ever did love her at all. "Kripa! Kripa!" Karan called out to her from behind. She turned surprised to find him behind her, "sweetie do you need a ride to school? I can drop you off and pick you up?" Karan questioned, truly he wanted to see the faces of whoever was killing his baby sister in the inside.

Kripa smiled and shook her head, "it's okay bhai you don't have to do that for me, I'll see you later okay!" she smiled and walked away heading off for her destination. Another thing she never wanted to do in her life was become a hassle or an unwanted thing or person on Karan, she loved him too much to bother him although she knew he wanted only the best for her.
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"Oye moti you are late! You were supposed to be here ten minutes before so we could mock you! You completely ruined my morning! Next time show up on time!" Josh snarled at Kripa. Kripa stared back into his eyes hurt once again, but inside the nagging feeling of him controlling her life never left her alone. She walked away without saying anything to afraid to muster the courage and talk back to him. "OH NO LOOK THE FLOOR JUST CRACKED!" Prithivi retorted trying to run away from Kripa and pretended to fall to the floor. Angad watched both of them amused, his eyes twinkling with something very interesting.

"Kripa!" he called out to her with sudden amusement flickering in his eyes. Kripa rolled her eyes and turned around, "do you want to say something as well? Feel free to!" she mumbled hoarsely, apparently trying to stand up against them was only causing more pain, she was crying and they both knew it. Angad glanced at her, the amusement slightly dying down in his eyes; in seconds as if it were not true Kripa fought back the urge to feel sympathy in his eyes for her. Shaking her head negatively she turned around and walked away when she felt Josh and Prithivi get into a squabble with Angad. Seconds later she found herself on the ground with Angad on top of her. "Ahh can't breath, suffocating!" Angad managed to mumble with a cheeky smile on his face, although he felt bad for her but he always thought those who looked like they did was because they decided to look like that so in a second there he was lying on top of her disgusted and pretending to gasp for air.

"Can you please get off me?" Kripa replied back softly, Angad glanced into her eyes, they were filled with so much pain and what surprised him even more was that she was still kind. He didn't want that from her he wanted to be fought against. He smirked mentally and got up, "thank gosh I thought I was going to suffocate I mean look at me I only weight 175 muscle lbs. [84.5 kilos] I don't think I could have survived with a three hundred pound person on top of me, and boy if she did, I would walk out of here completely broken --like this!" he spoke imitating an old man with a walking stick.
*****

Kripa walked into the lunch room and waited in line to grab something to drink, she was feeling dehydrated from sitting in the sun so long. Sighing she glanced around the room and found her every movement being monitored by those around her. Quickly she glanced away and grabbed a lemonade bottle and turned to head towards the door when she heard a chanting start in the far end of the lunch room. "Look everyone there she is MOTI! MOTI! ELEPHANT! ELEPHANT! Come on everyone join in!" Angad, Prithivi and Josh screamed with a mocking laughter. In seconds the cafeteria was in an uproar, everyone was chanting elephant at Kripa, and what hurt even more was the lunch ladies and workers didn't bother to shut them up. With a hopeful glance towards the lunch lady, Kripa waited to see her telling everyone to quiet down but nothing. The tears immediately welled up faster than expected and she turned to leave her head for the first time in her life held low, not once had she ever forgotten to keep her head high, but today because of the world she had lost.

So why was she still breathing, why was her heart beating and most importantly why was she still here? She thought but no one knew the answers, she was here but mentally she had died in that cafeteria, the worst anyone could have done had been taken to another level, no one had decided to side with her, not even the teachers or supervisors available instead they had decided to chant along with them something so low and wicked. Tearing apart the last bit of self esteem that would have wanted to keep her alive. And for the first time again in her life Kripa Sharma was heading towards suicide as an option to end the agony….

To be continued, does Kripa try and kill herself, will she go back to school? When does Kripa have a makeover…so many questions to be answered but not so fast….

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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sat Mar 21, 2009 8:07 pm

very good write up yaar :=D>
jus hope kripa doesnt do anything like u've mentioned
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 22, 2009 6:20 am

omg dis part was awesumm!!!!!!!!!!!
aaww i fee soooo sorry fr my kripa jaanu!
hehe
shes sho shweet!
atleast angads feelin a lil sorry!!!!
bt plz.......hav a make over fr her FAST!!!!!!
n yhh....dont make her have a suicidal attepmt!
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:58 am

awwh great FF yaar
omg dont make the story go down to sad direction..
we want happiness...lol
loving it so far!
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Wed Mar 25, 2009 5:59 pm

thanx guys for the comments. posting the next update right now Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Wed Mar 25, 2009 6:00 pm

Chapter 4:

The rest of the day continued by, after lunch Kripa dealt with even more insulting remarks about her appearance, but what did they matter now? She was done for, her self esteem was far too low to be brought up again and there no longer was any point in living. Sighing she headed towards the gate to leave campus when a whistle forced her to turn around. Thinking it was Angad, Josh and Prithivi, Kripa turned around slowly she was afraid of them. She was completely scared of them, so much she feared to look them in the eye or upset them. That was had managed to happen in two days.

Closing her eyes she glanced towards the direction of the voice, five seconds passed, half a minute passed and finally fed up with the quietness Kripa opened her red eyes and shuddered. "bhai you and here?" she manage to say looking away from his disturbed and pained face. "Kripa are you okay? Your eyes are bright red!" Karan spoke slightly frustrated and scared, he couldn't see her like that but everyone around here was not going to help him and he knew that. "I'm fine bhai, I just have a headache and I've been rubbing my eyes for a while, they were hurting so yeah -- out of habit!" Kripa spoke hesitantly, Karan stared at her he easily knew she was lying but also knew she was in no condition to speak.

"Let's go sweetie, I came to pick you up and every day I will pick you up from school! Not to forget drop you off!" Karan spoke with authority. Kripa smiled and fell into step with him as they moved towards the car. "Kripa how was school?" Karan asked hesitantly, he was afraid she would tell him something he wouldn't be able to bear, but somehow managed to disguise his concern. "it was okay bhai, nothing so great and nothing so bad!" she mumbled adding emphasis on every word hoping that Karan would be able to understand she was not lying. Karan nodded negatively, how could she possibly think he wouldn't be able to catch that one. Perhaps he would ask at home, where Kripa would be able to express her feelings without having to think about anything else.

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"ELEPHANT! I missed you yesterday, you know how bored I was sitting in class and at lunch with no one to bother?" Angad snapped at Kripa, he truly missed having her around; it was as if someone important was gone from his life -- well that wasn't how it felt rather he just missed having someone to pick on! He truly looked forward to ragging someone to the point where they would break and leave forever. And that was what Angad Khanna would do from today onwards, something that would break Kripa down even more, but was that even possible? Well Angad Khanna was willing to take chances …

Kripa just stared back at him blankly, no softness, no rudeness and no emotion at all in her usually tender and cheeky voice. Angad stared back, perhaps she was rethinking about leaving the school! And he was very pleased with himself. "Can I help you?" Kripa asked expressionless. Angad stared back dumbfounded rather speechless, what was he going to say that was going to ruin her completely. He had totally forgotten.
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"Moti!" Josh screamed from the opposite side of the hall. All heads turned towards Kripa who walked with her head low, not bothering to glance at the accusing faces questioning why she was going to this certain school or fat? "you listen to me moti! I am talking to you elephant!" Josh barked at her. Kripa flinched away that was okay but it still hurt, everything was getting worse, how longer could she suffer. Just when she thought they couldn't she jinxed herself and found herself in the middle of the podium.

All around her, many of the boys and girls walked towards her dressed in baggy overly huge clothes. She tried frowning but she didn't care, they could do all they wanted and she wouldn't say anything because she was done. "fat ***, Fat ***, Fat **!" they all chanted at her, they hated her for no reason in particular. When from the far end of the hallway a voice spoke screaming at everyone to shut up, "what the heck is your problem, leave her alone! She is just overweight but she is exactly like us, you freaks!" an average height looking girl with short black hair screamed at those around her. Kripa looked at her, and shook her head it was just another ploy, and she knew it the instant the girl rushed towards her screaming at her in the face. Shaking her head she walked towards her lonely tree where she sat down blankly staring off into nothing in particular.

"its now or never!" another voice called out to her, Kripa glanced around trying to locate the voice but was momentarily distracted when she found piles and piles of food dumped on top of her. Kripa froze, and once again the blank tears rushed out of her eyes. And this time the nagging feeling for suicide increased, either that or running away but where? Where would someone accept somebody like her….

To be continued, thank you everyone for the previous comments and I sincerely hope I am not offending anyone, this ff is based off of certain feelings those around me have felt and I have just created a character who deals with this and comes out strong….

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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:25 pm

aawww..yaar this world na never looks beyond physical appearances.
i really pity those people who believe that being beautiful is everything in the world..fir chahe sabse khoobsurat insaan sabse bure kaam kyun na kare 'not talking' appearances r deceptive after all

feeling sad for kripa..but i know she'll get out of all this soon 'Grin' *hopefully*

do continue sukhi..u write well 'clap'
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Sun Mar 29, 2009 7:53 am

aawww.........
another part filld wid emotions!!!
dis was sooperb yaar!

i feel bad fr kripa!....she really seems sum1 close 2 me

hope she cmz outta dis soon!
waitingg fr da 12th part!!

updt asap!
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PostSubject: Re: Undesirable - AK ff Part14/Page9   Wed Apr 01, 2009 10:34 am

nice update feeling sad fr kripa
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