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FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)

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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:08 pm

verni is baar i am soon to reply
very excited mussoorie wht is gona happen over there bolka
cont soon bacha
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:23 pm

@ marshtric : thanku... will try to cont the same...

@ nittu : haan is baar so soon... thnku bchchaaaa... hmm be excited... kyunki kuch kuch ya bohut kuch hoga wahan...
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:34 am

Good job Verni...loved the forth and comings ...
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:40 am

@ reshu : thnku bchchaa...
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:26 am

awesome write up verni Grin
i just loved reading it..for a moment even i started thinking what is CP rolling on the floor rolling on the floor
loved sudha and raj's bit to convince su-kk to go to mussorie
continuee as jaldi as possible acha bounce
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Mon Jul 27, 2009 11:00 am

awsoome part verni.....waitin for their trip soo eagerly....jaldi likhna Happy
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:24 am

wowee..great part Bachcha...loved the humour you put in..pushpaaaa..hehe...bahut hi achha nautanki doctor tha...ab write soon...cant wait for them to meet again!!!
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:10 pm

@ amu : glad u liked it bchchaaaa..

@ poorvi : thnks.. wud cont soon..

@ rahi : intezaarrrrrr.. ka phal meetha hoga..
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:15 pm

“Mission accomplished”

Saying this Raj and Sudha shake hands.

Sudha : Achcha ab main chalti hun bohut si packing baaki hai.... byeee

Raj : Sudha ek minute suno to...

Sudha stops and turns...

Sudha : Kya?... arey dekh kya rahe ho? Jaldi bolo...

Raj (goes and stands near her) : I luv u...

Sudha (smiles) : I luv u too... achcha nw m going.... bye...

.........................................................................

Sudha and Kumkum get down from the cab and enter the hotel...

Sudha : Kumkum tera room no. 419 hai, 4th floor... tu chal main aati hun... room khula hai...
saaman rakhwa diya hai..

Kumkum : par tu kahan?

Sudha : arey kuch formalities hain poori karke aati hun... tu chal naa... khoyegi to nahi naa...

Kumkum shakes her head slowly and smiles...

Kumkum reaches the 4th floor... and was searching for room no. 419, she sees it and enters...
Lights were off.. she wasn’t able to see anything properly... till then she collides with something... or rather say, someone.... and is about to fall but the person holds her...

The person held her by waist tightly... she senses the hold... and she was holding the person, her hands clinging to the shirt... there was dark... they couldn’t see anything but they didn’t shout as though they knew they weren’t with strangers..

The person made her stand erect... they were still holding each other... the person held her by waist and Kumkum’s hands on the person’s shoulders..

Kumkum and the person spoke together....

Kumkum : Sumit.

Person : Kumkum.

The lights are switched on and we see Sumit and Kumkum standing infront of each other...

Sudha enters..

Sudha : Kumkum tum yahan... tum 416 mein kya kar rahi ho?... maine tumhe 419 bataya tha
naa...

They look at the door...

Sudha : shaayad.. yahan ka last number loose hai..

Sumit and Kumkum move their hands off each other slowly...

Sudha was already told by Raj that Sumit’s room no. Is 416... and she saw Sumit for the first time but had to pretend that she didn’t know him...

Sudha : Dekhiye m really sorry... wo meri friend ko kuch misunderstanding ho gayi n wo...

She was still speaking but Kumkum goes out from there...

Sumit : It’s okk...

After saying this he goes back to his unpacking... Sudha sees this and says to herself in mind,

Sudha : Bilkul ek jaise hain dono...

Then she also goes to her room...


Hope u all like it...
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:47 am

Very good Verni...loved this interaction....
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Mon Aug 10, 2009 6:49 am

haiiii..woh ek hold main mera dhimaak tho kahan kahan pahunch gaya...hehe...good part Bachcha, but too short yaar Sad cant wait to see how they'll behave in each other's presence Dreaming
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:56 pm

@ reshu : thnku bchchaaa

@ rahi : haan haan tera dimaag waise bhi ek jagah pe rehta bhi hai... hehe
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Thu Aug 13, 2009 5:01 am

awesommee.. Loving it simply loved it
ab jaldi se kk-su ki bol chaal plus more romantic scenes shuru karwayo lol n write lamba lamba na..itne chote part se kuch nahi banta
will be waiting for the next part
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Sat Aug 15, 2009 5:09 am

@ amu : thnku bchchaaaaaaa... jo tu keh rahi hai .. itn aasan nahi hai ...
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:20 am

sorry bachu i am late i was busy
i can imagine the whole thing superb it is
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PostSubject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)   Mon Aug 31, 2009 9:16 am

wow soo good...continue soon
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