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FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]

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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:23 am

lmao great Dolly...
woohoo mera bf hai Mohit.. haaye i love u for this..
&& my sis's bf and my bf are brothers and they drive a hot red convertables.. not bad.. haaye.. kya dimaag hai Dolly..lol

plz do continue
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:04 pm

hehehe
me nd Prii wid the hot hunks.... kaise lagre hain?? Razz
lol Prii... hamare tho ash!!!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:06 am

xxRj reenoxx wrote:
hehehe
me nd Prii wid the hot hunks.... kaise lagre hain?? Razz
lol Prii... hamare tho ash!!!
lolzz

lol hell ya..
ommg DOLLYYYYY where are u..?
we dying to see our parts.. plz come
i know u are here in my room so wakie up...lol
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:22 am

Prii_Loves_Mohit wrote:
xxRj reenoxx wrote:
hehehe
me nd Prii wid the hot hunks.... kaise lagre hain?? Razz
lol Prii... hamare tho ash!!!
lolzz

lol hell ya..
ommg DOLLYYYYY where are u..?
we dying to see our parts.. plz come
i know u are here in my room so wakie up...lol

im here guys after Prii woke me up from my beauty sleep. lolz
let me continue now before dadi and dada comes with danda... lol.gif" alt="lol!" longdesc="38" />
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PostSubject: Part 2   Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:50 am

Part 2

Good Morning! Its a Saturday morning.. Everyone is home except the dad ofcourse he has to be at the hospital. Mom and everyone else stayed asleep and woke up late around 11am. Except the baby woke up around 2pm. Mom woke up made breakfast: eggs, waffles and chai/orange juice. Dada came downstairs asking for his teeth.... Henna beti mera daat kaha hai? Henna looks oddly at her father, saying I dunno ask mom (dadi). Dadi comes down and yells at him saying you yourself don't know where u put your own daat? thats very shameful. What will you do without me in life? Dada says, oh nothing keep on bugging you my jaan. The kids comes down and a phone call rings...... Mom picks up the phone but no one says anything. it seemed like a blank call. Dada asked whose it? Prii says, shayad koi blackmailer hoga? Reeno comes downstairs all dressed up in tight jeans, tank top with a furry jacket on. Amrit and Rabia asks Reeno.. uhmm where are you going? Reeno says, oh well i got a college party to go to. Amrit & Rabia says, noooo u promised me to take us to the circus with my high school friends...? Reeno, no i didn't, stop putting words in my mouth what i have not said. Prii, laughs out loud. Mom says, girls stop fighting and eat your breakfasts & Reeno you cannot go out, you must take your sisters where they have to go.

Phone rings again.... Prii picks up the phone and it was Reeno's bf Arjun. Reenoooo.... theres a phone call for you.... Reeno comes and Prii says... go inside the room....

Reeno walks with da phone to another room and it was her bf. Reeno tells him, hey jaan i am sorry i cannot make it today to the party, my mom is making me take my younger evil sisters to a boring circus. Arjun says, ohh thats too bad. Hey how about i come there as well? Reeno says, nooo i dont want my younger sisters to think i have bf, or else they'll tell on my parents. Reeno hanged up the phone and sudden;y turned around and she got scared so bad..she started breathing heavy..lol it was baby Pinky crawling around her...lol Prii came inside and Reeno smiled at baby Pinky and told Prii, phew i tot it was mom or someone else behind me. Oh well.. its not like baby Pinky will tell on me and she cannot even talk. lol

They all went into the kitchen and Reeno told Amrit & Rabia, ok i'll take you, but you cannot bug me like always... you do whatever u want and i do mine.. except watching u guys.

Dada..... stares at Pinky because she was eating like a pig. lol.gif" alt="lol!" longdesc="38" /> Mom gave her sqashed scrambled eggs and milk =[ *yuck* so dada was like Pinky beti... should i feed you? && baby Pinky looked at him like this :affraid: :grim: ..... Phone rings.....Dadi picked it up and it was dad... hii mom... is Henna around? Dadi gives the phone to Henna and tells her, sorry jaan i'll be late for dinner, i have a important surgery 2nite and i wont able to make it to dinner or family nite. Henna gets really angry and slams the phone down. && mumbles, 4 nites in a row, no dinner or family nite with the family. && always isn't all surguries all important..? Prii says, maybe he's cheating on u mom. Mom, looks at Prii very Evil or Very Mad and says you better run before i come with my chappal and your father better not be with some nurse chick.. or else my danda and bundook is all ready.

Reeno says, come on Amrit & Rabia, lets go. Prii goes to the library and tells her mom dat, but not really. she's meeting Mohit at the library so they can go hangout at his place. Prii & Reeno loves writing in their diaries, so that same day mom went into their room to get dirty laundry and finds their diaries wide open. mom starts reading lil pieces of it until Pinky starts crying, bcoz Dadi wanted to give baby Pinky a bath but Pinky didn't wanna take a bath. So Dada, says awww my goochii woochi sweet Pinky u gotta take a bath, or else bad germs will come out from under your crib and eat you up at nite. Dadi yelled at him for telling scary stories to baby Pinky so it made baby Pinky more cry so mom comes saying what happened? Dadi says oh nothing, you know how your father is with telling scary stories?

Mom goes back into Prii & Reeno's room and reads their diaries and gets really red headed and starts thinking..... Rolling Eyes she calls dad (donny) and some nurse his secretary picked up the phone and says, Dr.Picasso's Clinic, how can i help u? Henna replies saying give to Donny now, the nurse says, sorry he's with a patient, can i take a msg? Henna, starts argueing with the nurse and says look im his wife and this is an emergency. The nurse says sorry, i cannot go inside his office, he busy checking out the patient. Henna gets really pist and says whats he doing? checking out a patient in his office????? && Henna knows Donny (her hubby) does all patient checking in the well-room not his office. so she puts down the phone and grabs her purse and tells her parents and Pinky, i'll be back in 1 hr.

Dada and Dadi looked all freaked out, thinking whats going on? Pinky is in the bath tub splashing water and playing with her rubber ducky and all happy thinking nothing in her mind.

**** Will continue soon **** Please give your thoughts/comments/whatever... thanks

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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:00 am

OMGGGGGGGGGG...this is hilarious...Dada using daat.....sukhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...and henna.....u give scrambled eggs...gosh

Nice one bt yaar..keep it up!!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:04 am

*Resham* wrote:
OMGGGGGGGGGG...this is hilarious...Dada using daat.....sukhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...and henna.....u give scrambled eggs...gosh

Nice one bt yaar..keep it up!!

lolz.. im glad u loved it Resham.
wait and watch.. more funny scenes between u and dada coming...lol
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:38 am

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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:19 am

whtt an ff........truly amazing :cheers:

hats off to u miss.dolly

too gud to see sm members in such lovely roles 😉 😉
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:53 am

'rolling on the floor' the teeth bit was the best bit 'rolling on the floor' this dada n dadi rock...

one question tho... dada-dadi are donny's parents na ...not mine... ':-/'

mere hote toh nana/nani hote...
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:39 am

hahahah thats soo funny i go to lib but instead meet my mohit.. haaye...
haha reeno got stuck taking rabia and amrit to the circus.. borinnnn
lmao.. dada has daat retainers.. hailaaaaa......

whers Amby's part..? is she still sleeeping kyaa...?

hailaa mom aur dad mein love ka confusion.. lolzzzzz
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:46 am

nice write up lolz..

Henna wrote:
one question tho... dada-dadi are donny's parents na ...not mine... ':-/'

mere hote toh nana/nani hote...

me too was thinking the same 'Wink)' since they're called Dada Dadi, they must b donny's parents only
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:47 am

poorvi wrote:
whtt an ff........truly amazing :cheers:

hats off to u miss.dolly

too gud to see sm members in such lovely roles 😉 😉

hii Poorvi im Dolly..
thanks for liking it. will continue asap.
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:48 am

Henna wrote:
'rolling on the floor' the teeth bit was the best bit 'rolling on the floor' this dada n dadi rock...

one question tho... dada-dadi are donny's parents na ...not mine... ':-/'

mere hote toh nana/nani hote...

hey Henna
thanks for liking it.
oh oops.. is it a problem if i make it the mom's parents?
i made it mom's parents.. i mean i didnt know u can call it nana-nani in hindi.. i used dada-dadi in gujarati land.. lol its ok...

let me know if u want me to change it..?
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:49 am

Prii_Loves_Mohit wrote:
hahahah thats soo funny i go to lib but instead meet my mohit.. haaye...
haha reeno got stuck taking rabia and amrit to the circus.. borinnnn
lmao.. dada has daat retainers.. hailaaaaa......

whers Amby's part..? is she still sleeeping kyaa...?

hailaa mom aur dad mein love ka confusion.. lolzzzzz

lolz Prii... just wait and watch u'll pretty soon u'll get in trouble...lol

lmao... Amby is not in Part 2 yet.. lol
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:50 am

amrit23 wrote:
nice write up lolz..

Henna wrote:
one question tho... dada-dadi are donny's parents na ...not mine... ':-/'

mere hote toh nana/nani hote...

me too was thinking the same 'Wink)' since they're called Dada Dadi, they must b donny's parents only

hey guys i replied above in Henna's post.

will continue asap.
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:25 am

Nice...one....the dada dadi part was funny... 'rolling on the floor' 'rolling on the floor' 'rolling on the floor'

And seedha...6 kids ke mommy daddy made us... 'Happy)' ...population control ppl are surely gonna cum and arrest us... 'Wink)'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:39 am

Donny wrote:
Nice...one....the dada dadi part was funny... 'rolling on the floor' 'rolling on the floor' 'rolling on the floor'

And seedha...6 kids ke mommy daddy made us... 'Happy)' ...population control ppl are surely gonna cum and arrest us... 'Wink)'

lolz Donny....
hahah keep on reading.. more to come.
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:41 am

miss.dollz wrote:

oh oops.. is it a problem if i make it the mom's parents?
i made it mom's parents.. i mean i didnt know u can call it nana-nani in hindi.. i used dada-dadi in gujarati land.. lol its ok...

let me know if u want me to change it..?

nopes it's fine... you can write it as you wish.. 😄 I was just getting a little confused... 'Wink)' confusion cleared now.
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:13 pm

omg..omg......wow!!
lovd it!!!!!!
do carry on!!!!!!!
me nd amu going to a circus :cheers:
henna read da diary Cool bechare reeno nd prii
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sun Apr 12, 2009 12:07 am

hawww omg!!!
mummy ji read r diaries??
bad bad mummy!!!
bacchon ko she dznt give any privacy...

Billi------> very bad!! 🇳🇴
Fab part.... length also was gud so updt asap!!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Sun Apr 12, 2009 3:01 am

please do continue Dollz..
we desperately waiting...lol
got it just gets interesting and more interesting....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:11 am

Part 3

Reeno took Rabia & Amrit to the circus and along came her bf Arjun dressed up as a clown.....Prii and Mohit went to the library and Prii tried to do her essay but Mohit was playing around with her hair....

Amby woke up and came downstairs seeing her grandparents fighting again about a mouse inside her kitchen and dadi was on the chair standing and dada was saying get down, you will fall off the chair.. so dadi says, not until u remove that mouse inside the cabinet. Dada says uff.. omggg... kaha hai mouse? i dont see it.. Dadi says put your glasses on then u might see it..lol Amby walks into the kitchen grabs a bagal and orange juice and sits on the table and eats. Amby asks wheres mom? dadi says, she went to go ur dad's office to see whats going on?

Amby says, ohh ok.. she finishes her breakfast and tells dada that you left your glasses in your pants and the pants is in the washer machine. Dadi gets soo angryy and says.. WHATT..? Dada says oh ok.. thanks.. Dadi says what thanks.. they are in the washer, go get it out now.. Dada says, no its ok.. at least my glasses come out nice and clean... lol

*** will continue soon ***
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:41 pm

haa circus they went
enjoying reading it
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PostSubject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7]   Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:01 pm

heyy...nice fic..really loved reading it...keep up the gud work Happy
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