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PostSubject: 29 April written update   29 April written update EmptyThu Apr 30, 2009 4:30 am

Jai Siya Ram


Kush runs to the palace of Mayapur to meet Luv. The sentries stop him.
Kush - The king of this place is my younger brother. I want to meet him.
Sentries - Do not ever say that. Otherwise, you will be put in jail.
Kush - I am saying the right thing. My brother is the king of this place.

The sentries laugh. They push Kush.
Kush - God, help me. Tell me a way to meet my brother.
Parvati - Swami, why are you keeping quiet? Isn't Kush's condition unbearable? Doesn't he have the right to meet his brother? Is this your justice?
Shiv - Have patience, devi. The cycle of happiness and sorrow keeps moving in life. This is life.


Kush sees a bard singing.
Kush - Where are you going?
Bard - I am going to the king.
Kush - Let me also come along. I want to see the king.

The bard agrees.

In Mayapur
A messenger - Maharaj, bards want to meet you.
Luv - Bring them here with full honour.

Kush comes there with the bard.
Kush - Luv, I have come.
Luv - Who are you and what are you saying?

The mahamantri smiles.
Kush - Luv, have you forgotten your elder brother?
Luv - I do not have any elder brother (to the bard) Who have your brought with you?
Bard - Maharaj, this boy wants to say something.
Luv - What do you want to say?

Kush sings:-
Vandevi ke bete Luv Kush do bhai
Vandevi ke bete Luv Kush do bhai
Unse hua Shiv ji ka anadar
Dono dukhi is baat ko lekar
Swarn-kamal arpit karne se
Kar de bhool kshama Shiv-shankar
Dhankuber ka divya sarovar
Swarn-kamal hai uske andar
Shiv ji ka Ashish pane ki
Durlabh swarn-kamal lane ki
Yojna banayi
Luv ko aa gayi murksha
Kush ki badh gayi chinta
Wahan kisi ne Kush ko ye upchar bataya
Ye phal bada chamatkari hai
Iska ras yadi murkshit ko pilayega
To woh punah chetna pa jayega
Kinto ras pilane wale ko saanp das lega
Aur woh jeevit nahi bachega
Kush raho mein bhatke
Luv maharaj bane hain
Bite dinon ki sari batein bhul gaye hain
Kis laye aashram chhod ke aaye
Kaise kaise kasht uthaaye
Hamko chaudah dinon ke andar
Swarn-kamal aana tha lekar
Laksh tha apna swarn-kamal
Sundar sapna swarn-kamal
Raaj ke maya mein tum atke
Kyun apne uddeshya se bhatke


Now Luv remembers everything.
Jab Kush ne ghatna ye sunayi
Puri kahani Luv ko yaad aayi

Luv shouts bhaiya. He runs to meet Kush and throws the crown.
Raj sinhasan tyaag ke uth gaya
Raj mukut bhi diya utar
Dono mile mil rahe
Naino mein aansu ki dhaar


Luv and Kush hug each other. Suddenly they notice that they both are in vanvasi dress and are in forest. There is no Mayapur.
Kush - There was a royal court here. How did it suddenly become a forest?
Luv - Bhaiya, even I cannot understand anything.
Kush - Your crown, your royal dress? You had become a king.
Luv - Yes, bhaiya. You also were bitten by a snake. How were you cured?
Kush - One washerman saved me. But how did it happen?
Luv - Is this a dream?
Kush - Yes, Luv. I also think that it was all a dream.

They hear Baba's(Hanuman's) voice.
Baba - Yes, it was all a dream.
Luv - Baba, where had you gone?
Baba - To me you said that you were going to bring my bag. And you are standing here and dreaming?

Luv notices that baba has his bag with him.
Luv - But how did you get your bag?
Baba - Forget all that. The bag had to come to me. So it came.
Luv - Baba, there is something wrong, which I cannot understand. (To Kush)Bhaiya, I am suspicious of Baba. Did he do some magic?
Baba - Oh, you are you doubting me - an old man? If you do not trust me, then go without me.
Kush - No baba, we did not mean it.
Baba - If you want to go with me, then tell your brother to keep quiet.
Luv - Ok, I will not say anything. Now, fine?


Luv and Kush walk with baba. After walking some distance, baba stops.
Baba -I forgot my evening prayer. You will make me forget my lord.
Luv - But evening prayer will take lots of time.
Baba - Let it. I will not move any further without completing my evening prayer.

Baba walks away from there.
Luv - Now where are you going?
Baba - When you two are here, can I concentrate?

Baba goes away.

Luv - Bhaiya, let us go.
Kush - How can we search for Kuber-lok alone? It is better to go with this baba.
LK wait for baba for a long time.
Baba thinks - Luv, Kush you will not esacape from baba so soon. Wait for a moment. I will come back soon.
He takes his original (Hanuman) form and flies.

Kush - Luv, what are you thinking?
Luv -Bhaiya, I am missing mother.
Kush - Even I am missing mother. She must be worried about us. She used to feed us with so much of love.
Luv - Bhaiya, I want to eat from Ma's hands. I think she must be remembering us.


Sita is shown remembering Luv and Kush. She imagines that Luv and Kush have come back and she is feeding them. Suddenly she realises that it was her imagination.
Kush - I know Luv that we have been away from Ma for long. But we cannot go back without finishing the task for which we came here.
Luv - Yes, bhaiya.. We should think about going to Kuber-lok. Why is baba still not back?
Kush - This is the time for his evening prayer. He will be back soon.


Hanuman is in Kailash.Hanuman - Mahadev, the test of Luv and Kush on Moh is complete and they have been successful.
Shiv - Bajrangbali, their test is not over. It was only the first stage. In human life, it is necessary to be free from fear. Luv and Kush have to pass a test to prove that they are free from fear. Bajrangbali, you have to initiate the test.
Hanuman - As you wish, prabhu.

(Now "darna mana hai" test is about to start. First moh. Now bhay(fear). What next? Freedom from hunger and thirst? Our scriptures show that even some very great warriors, who are known for their bravery, were overcome with fear on a few occasions. And Luv and Kush are expected to be free from fear at such a small age. Do Sagars have any plans of ending this track. I sometimes feel that Sagars must be feeling proud of themselves that they have written their own Uttar Ramayan and they must be patting themselves on tha back. I also want to pat them but I want to pat them very very hard.)
Precap - Baba drinks some water and faints. Luv suspects that he may be dead.Somebody wearing a crown (may be some devta or yaksha) comes there and says that he punished the baba.
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