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FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!

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PostSubject: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Tue Apr 14, 2009 9:30 am




Well, hello friends 'Happy' 'Happy' 'Happy' 'Happy' 'Happy'


I'd been planning to write something for sooooooooooo long...something totally crazy (which I haven't done in quite a long time 'Wink' )....so here goes...





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Thoda sa pyaar hua hai...thoda hai baaki..
AR toh dil de hi chuke...abhi papa ki haan hai baaki...



A lot happened in Lonavala - love, ladaayi, flirting, khinchaayi.....All that didn't happen was Armaan n Ridzy's sagaayi..
After all the mayhem, who can blame poor Dr. Shashank for going back to Sanjeevni?? 'sigh'


Yet, something did happen there....something with side effects...n really weird ones at that... O well, you guys better read it for yourself 'Wink'


(All the interns line up for duty in the morning...Armaan is late, n Dr. Kirti is fuming as usual..)

Kirti: Huh! Yeh Dr. Armaan kabhi nahin sudhrenge...itni lambi chhutti se aaye hain but phir bhi inka rest poora nahin hua.. 'angry'

Ridz: Par ma'am... 'Unsure'

Kirti: Dr. Riddhima...aap chup rahiye !

(Kirti's reading from a folder in her hand...Atul tries to get Anjali's attention.)

Atul(in a low voice): Anjali..Anjali...

Anjali: Kya hua Atul?

Atul: Tum bahut sweet ho Anjali... 'Grin'

Anjali: '/Happy'

Atul: Anjali Anjali Anjaliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Kirti: DR. ATUL 'angry'

(Atul turns towards her dreamily...)

Atul: Anjali... 'dream'

(Muskan pinches Atul.)

Kirti: Dr. Atul..ab aap jaag gaye hon toh Path Labs jaao...immediately !!

Atul(sadly): Yes ma'am.

(starts walking away...singing softly...)

Anjali Anjali Anjali...........

(Kirti looks at Anjali who is looking at him with a slight confused smile.....suddenly she becomes aware that Kirti is watching her n blushes.)

Kirti(in a soft tone): Dr. Anjali....

Anjali: Yes ma'am?

Kirti: Path labs

(Muskaan giggles....Anjali walks off...a bit dazed.. Suddenly Armaan comes running, with his mother and father running behind him.)

Armaan: Sorry Dr. Kirti....woh main...

Kirti: You are late Dr. Armaan 'angry'

(Armaan's dad sees her n tries to hug her....his wife tries to drag him away..)

Kirti(totally disgusted): Inhein yahaan se bhagaao please !!!

Armaan: Mom...please inhein lekar jaao na..

Armaan's dad: Kyun yaar? (sees Armaan's angry look...) Achha theek hai..main Shanky se milne ja raha hoon..

Armaan: Yeah..go..

Kirti(relieved): Dr. Armaan...aap aur Dr. Riddhima General Ward mein duty denge....aur aaj koi gadbad nahin honi chaahiye.

Armaan: Yes ma'am.

(He n Ridz walk towards the GW. Kirti sends Nikki to help Dr. Abhimanyu during his rounds, and assigns some paper work to Rahul and Muskaan.)

Nikki: Dr. Abhimanyu Modi ki help karni hai?? Hmm...my pleasure 'devil'

(Nikki knocks on the door of Abhimanyu's office. He calls her in. Actually he's daydreaming about Nikki.)

Abhi: Aaaaaaaaaaaarghhh!!!!

Nikki(very happily): Aapko heart attack aa raha hai kya...SIR??

Abhi: Nahin..woh...subah subah tumhaari shakal dekhkar koi bhi darr jaaye...

Nikki: As you say sir... 'batting eyelashes'

Abhi(suspiciously): Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho? Aur itni politely kyun baat kar rahi ho??

Nikki: Duty sir....aaj mujhe aapki help karni hai...sir 'batting eyelashes' Aap toh mahaan doctor hain...aapji respect kar rahi hoon...sir...

Abhi: Tumne kuch piya tha kya aaj subah?

Nikki: Yes sir...coffee...aap piyenge??

Abhi(still suspicious, but he really needs coffee): Yeah..ok...but saath chalenge...

Nikki: Ok..it's a date 'Happy'

Abhi(nervously): Date???

Nikki(in her normal mocking tone): Ohoo...ganda dimaag '8-|' Chalo ab.

(They walk towards the canteen...)


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This isn't anything crazy I know.... but it's just an introduction....wait for more 'Wink'




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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:16 am

wow amazing FF..
do continue
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 1:26 am

lol!!!
cont. sooon!!!
wanna read more!!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:37 am

Thanks guys...will update soon :smile:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 5:54 am

Part 2

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(Nikki n Abhi go to the canteen, which is full.)

Nikki: Uh-oh....ab kya karein??

(Abhi suddenly feels a twinge of something....he starts shaking. Nikki looks at him, concerned.)

Nikki: Kya hua Dr. Modi? Heart attack? 'Grin'

Abhi: Will you stop that Dr. Nikita?? Mujhe heart attack nahin aa raha !! 'angry'

Nikki(looks hurt): Sorry sir...

(Abhi feels guilty, apologises to her n turns away.)

Nikki: I think you should rest Dr. Modi.

Abhi: Nahin...pehle rounds complete kar lete hain.

Nikki: You sure?

Abhi: Yeah..let's go.

(They leave...Scene shifts to Armaan n Riddhima who are checking up on patients in the General Ward...Armaan keeps calling Ridz...n tries to find excuses to hold her hand or touch her.)

Ridz: Armaan...

Armaan(trying to kiss her): Yes darling?

Ridz(blushing): Kya kar rahe ho?

Armaan: I love you Riddhima.

Ridz(slaps him lightly): Hato yahaan se. Patients ke saamne bhi sharam nahin aati.

Armaan: They don't mind. 'Wink'

Amit(a teenager): Yeah...we don't mind. 'Wink'

(Ridz gives him a strict look n turns towards an old patient in the corner.)

Ridz: Good morning Mr. Singh. How are you feeling today?

Singh: Tum jaise badtameez logon se pareshaan hoon. Kuch sharam nahin reh gayi aajkal ke bacchon mein. 'angry'

(Ridz looks upset, but proceeds to read his charts.)

Armaan(to Ridz): Inki problem kya hai? 'angry'

Ridz: Calm down Armaan. Actually Mr. Singh ne suicide attempt kiya tha. Poisoned himself.

Armaan: What?? Toh inhein GW mein kyun rakha hai? He should be in a private room.

Ridz: Wahaan the...but wahaan phir se attempt kiya.

Armaan: Case kaun handle kar raha hai?

Ridz: Abhi tak Dr. Goel handle kar rahe the, but unhein doctors' conference attend karnejaana pada...toh aaj se yeh case main handle karoongi.

(Dr. Kirti comes in. She sees Armaan n Riddhima talking in a corner n thinks they are up to no good.)

Kirti(sharply): Dr. Armaan and Dr. Riddhima...aap log kar kya rahe hain? Yeh hospital hai...koi restaurant nahin jo aap yahaan romance karenge.

Ridz(stammers nervously): But...ma'am....hum log Mr. Singh ki case history discuss kar rahe the.

Kirti: Yeah right '8-|'

(Suddenly Shubhankar comes...blushing a bit..)

Shubhankar: Kirti....uhh...Dr. Kirti...please aap aayengi? I need your help.

Kirti(blushing): Yes Dr. Shubhankar.

(To AR..) Behave yourselves.

Singh: Huh!! Sab ke sab ek jaise. 'angry'

(Armaan looks at him...then he n Riddhima complete the round of the ward.)

(Meanwhile, Shubhankar takes Kirti to...yes...he takes Kirti to the fire escape !!)

Kirti: Shubhankar...yeh kya...??

Shubhankar(blushing): Tum itni busy rehti ho...aur ghar pe Navnita hoti hi...maine socha...yehin thoda waqt guzaar lein...

Kirti(blushing too): Idea toh achha hai...


(Billy and Annie reach Shashank's office. Billy goes in without knocking, Annie tries to stop him, but in vain.)

Billy: Hey Shanky!! Glad to see me na?? 'Grin'

Shashank: Na 'angry' Aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain?

Billy: Main apne best friend se milne aaya hoon.

Shashank: Toh milo na us bechaare se.

Billy(looking hurt): Arey Shanky...tum hi toh ho mere best friend 'love struck'

(Shashank stares at him for 5 seconds, then faints. Annie grabs Billy and takes him out of the room. Billy sees a cute nurse n runs away after her, while Annie goes to the reception to find help for Dr. Shashank.)

Annie: Errrr....excuse me??

Miss Lovely: Yes ji? 'Grin'

Annie: Woh...errrr....Dr. Shashank... 'Unsure'

Lovely: Apne room mein honge ji...

Annie: Woh toh mujhe pata hai. Actually na, Dr. Shashank behosh ho gaye hain.

Lovely: Kya?? 'Shock'

(Is about to call Dr. Modi, but Annie asks her to call Armaan. Armaan comes n reassures his mom that he'd handle everything. Lovely is happy to meet his mom.)

Lovely: Toh aap Dr. Armaan ki mummy hain 'Grin'

Annie: Yeah 'Happy'

Lovely(in a confiding tone): Agar main kuch time chhutti pe na jaati na, toh Armaan ko Riddhima ki jagah mujhse pyaar ho jaata...aur phir aap meri saasuma hoti ji. (giggles n tries to hug Annie, who chokes.)

Par mujhe na Dr. Modi bahuttttttttttttt cute lagte hain.

Aapko bhi cute lagte hain na? Lagte hi honge ji...woh hain hi aise.....

(Lovely continues talking about Dr. Modi....Annie gets an idea.)

Annie: Miss Lovely...

Lovely: Oh ji mujhe Lovely kaho na...mummyji 'Grin'

Annie: Errr...haan...Lovely...tum kitni lovely ho...Dr. Modi se better ladka mil sakta hai tumhein...Main ek bataaun??

Lovely(blushing): Haan ji...........??

Annie: Uska naam hai Billy....red shirt, blue jeans...yahin par hain...

Lovely: Oh ji...thank you mummyji (hugs Annie n rushes off....Annie sits with an evil smile...)

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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:05 am

'rolling on the floor' love how you've kept everything so real...and esp the way you wrote the first part... sorta rhyming type lines... that was great.

'ganda dimaag' bit got me rolling 'rolling on the floor'

the suicide bit was funny too.... 'Happy)'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:20 am

'Wink)' 'Wink)' 'Wink)' Just wait n watch Hennu....abhi toh you'll get more surprises 'Wink'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:52 am

really nice yaar 'rolling on the floor' loved reading it
best of luck for ur ff ':-bd'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:00 am

Thanks Amrit 'hug' 'hug'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Wed Apr 15, 2009 9:36 am

loved parts
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:55 am

Thanks for the encouragement Nitya :smile:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Thu Apr 16, 2009 11:32 am




Part 3


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(Dr. Armaan rushes to Dr. Shashank's office, but he's shocked to see that Dr. Gupta is missing!! Meanwhile, working in the Path Lab. with Atul, Anjali is still looking quite thoughtful.)

Atul(humming softly): Anjali...Anjali.....

Anjali(disgusted by the smell of the samples): Ewwwww....kitni smell aa rahi hai!

Atul: Laao Anjali....yeh main kar deta hoon.

Anjali: No! Yeh mera kaam hai. Tum kyun karoge?

Atul(with a serious look): Kyunki tum meri dost ho.

Anjali: Sirf dost?

Atul: Nahin. Tum usse zyaada ho....par humaari friendship zyaada important hai.

(Anjali is touched by his reply.)

Anjali: Tum bahut sweet ho Atul. 'Happy'

Atul: 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush'

(They carry on with their work. Meanwhile Rahul and Muskaan are working in the office.)

Rahul: Muskaan...woh red file pass kar.
(sees that she's looking lost....reaches out to touch her arm.)
Muskaan??

(Muskaan suddenly snaps out of her reverie...she's affected by Rahul's touch, n hides it by talking to him sharply.)

Muskaan: Apna ganda sa haath hata le. 'angry'

Rahul: Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahin hai tujhe haath lagaane ka. Nahaati bhi nahin hai gandi. 'yuck'

Muskaan: Main roz din mein do baar nahaati hoon. Tu nahin nahaata. Huh!! 'angry'

Rahul: Main roz din mein teen baar nahaata hoon. Huh!! 'angry'

(Muskaan starts hitting him n he tries to defend himself. They start fighting. Armaan is frantically searching for Dr. Shashak, but to no avail. He bumps into Nana who is looking quite harried. Nana stops Armaan.)

Nana: Oye ruk ruk..

Armaan: Abhi nahin Nana..mujhe jaldi hai. 'Unsure'

Nana: Tu jaldi chhod. Yeh bata tune Sukeerti ko dekha?

Armaan(distractedly): Haan...Dr. Kirti jaisi dikhti hain.

Nana: Woh toh mujhe bhi pata hai. Tune use dekha?
(he starts his usual verbal volley.)

Kitna paisa kharcha kiya...jab shooting karne jaao toh gaayab ho jaati hai...film kaise khatam hogi time se...mushkil se toh Dr. Shashank ka kamra bhi khaali kiya..kitni mehnat lagi...koi samajhta hi nahin hai...

(he breaks off n stares at Armaan who is looking at him dazedly.)

Kya hua?

Armaan: Dr. Shashank ka kamra kya?

Nana: Arey khaali karna pada...woh doctor soya hua tha wahaan. Maine uthaaya par nahin utha.

Armaan: Phir?

Nana: Phir main use chhod aaya.

Armaan: Kahaan??!!!

Nana: Tu woh sab chhod...Sukeerti kahaan hai?

Armaan(desperately): Bataao na Nana.. 'Unsure'

Nana: Arey mujhe pata hota toh tujhe thodi na poochhta '8-|'

Armaan: Sukeerti ko maaro goli..Dr. Shashank kahaan hain?

Nana(looks at him n smiles....n then he sings): Wahin...jahaan koi...aata jaati nahin...

(He winks at Armaan. At the fire escape....Shubhankar wants to hold Kirti's hand, but is feeling tooooooo shy. They look at each other, blush, n look away, smiling shyly. Again they look at each other, blush n look away, smiling shyly. Again they look at each other.....oh well, you guys got the idea na.. 'Wink' In another part of Sanjeevani, Billy has caught up with the girl he was following and is now trying to flirt with her.)

Billy: Hello young lady.. 'love struck'

Girl(nervously): Uhh...aahh..

Billy: I'm Billy...aur kyunki tum itni sweet ho tumhaara naam.........

(suddenly he becomes aware of a presence behind him. he turns around to see Sister Lovely, who is smiling shyly.)

Billy: Yes?

Lovely: Aap Billy ho na ji? 'blush'

Billy: Yes.. 'Unsure'

Lovely: Oh ji...haaye... (she faints.)

(Billy looks confused, then shrugs and turns to the girl, but she has vanished. He shrugs again, n walks away... Nikki and Dr. Abhimanyu are standing near the door to the fire escape. Abhi's feeling worse than before. N suddenly..........................)


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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:26 pm

haa lovely
now waiting fr next part
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:50 am

Wow...just read all the 3 parts and I must say you have an excellent sense of humour...I just love the way ur inter-weaving all the separate couples....it makes for great reading....keep going!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Sat Apr 18, 2009 8:57 am

@nitya....thanks dear..will continue soon...today or tomorrow latest Wink

@rah...glad u liked it :">:">:">
thankooz *hug*
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:27 am


Part 4


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(Suddenly the hospital plunges into darkness. Muskaan, who's fighting with Rahul, falls into his lap. Meanwhile, in the Path Labs, Atul n Anjali try to cope with the darkness.)

Anjali: Atul... 'Unsure'

Atul: I know tumhein andhere se darr lagta hai..do minute ruko..

Anjali: Tum kahin jaana mat please Atul.

Atul: Main humesha tumhaare saath hi hoon Anjali.

(He switches on a torch.)

Yaad hai jab last time andhera hua tha aur tum darr gayi thi? Tab se main torch lekar ghoomta hoon....taaki phir se andhera ho toh meri anjali ko darr na lage.. 'blush' 'blush' 'blush'

(Anjali just stares at him in surprise. She moves towards him, as if to hug him, but suddenly there is a sound at the doorway. Both scream...)

Anjali(very nervously): A-a-atul..

Atul(even more nervously): A-a-a-anjali...

Anjali(whispers): Wahaan kuch hai..

Atul: Tum ruko..main dekhta hoon.

(Anjali is surprised n impressed by his sudden bravery. Atul moves closer to the door and shines his flashlight on the object. They both scream again.)

(In the fire escape....Shubhankar hugs Kirti in fright, then pulls away shyly. He's debating whether to hug Kirti again or not when they hear a scream from above, and both move towards each other and hug tightly. Outside the fire escape, Nikki holds on to Abhimanyu's arm, but gets a shock....)

Abhi(screaming in a high-pitched tone): BACHAAO!! BACHAAO!! Meri izzat mat looto...(starts sobbing..)

(Totally shocked, Nikki falls back, pulling Abhi with her, n they fall down the fire escape. Nikki tumbles on to Kirti's lap, and Shubhankar manages to steady Abhimanyu. However, Shubhankar's touch makes Abhimanyu even more nervous.)

Abhi(still screaming): Bachaao...bhagwaan ke liye mujhe chhod do...meri izzat aapke haathon mein hai...please mujhe jaane do.. bachaao!!

(Shubhankar is dazed.)

Kirti(angrily): Yeh kya ho raha hai Shubhankar?? 'angry' Chhod do us ladki ko. Maine tumse yeh ummeed nahin ki thi kabhi. 'angry' 'angry' 'angry'

(Shubhankar can't speak because of fear. Abhimanyu keeps screaming.)

Kirti: SHUBHANKAR!!! 'angry' 'angry' 'angry'

(He snaps out of his shock n moves towards Kirti...Kirti tries to make Nikki get up from her lap, but she is too dazed to move.)

Shubhankar(to Abhi): Dekhiye..main ek senior doctor hoon...

Abhi: Aaaaaaa...bachaaoooo!!!

(A young man is walking in the corridoor when the lights go off, and he trips over something huge on the floor, banging his head. He passes out immediately. Armaan is rushing towards the place where Nana had left the unconscious Dr. Shashank. In the darkness, he collides with something. In the meantime, Atul tries to gather up enough courage to go near the ghostly image he and Anjali had seen in the torchlight. When he's quite close to the demonic image, there's a sudden sound n movement, n he rushes back to Anjali who hugs him tightly. A few moments later Atul shines his torch at the alien object again, and this time he hears Armaan's voice telling him to switch off the torch.)

Atul(relieved): Armaan!! Mere bhai mere dost!! 'Grin'

Armaan(blinking n hugging Atul): Champ?? Mujhe andha karne ka iraada tha kya?

Anjali: Armaan! Hum kitna darr gaye the...but pata hai..Atul was soooooo brave..

(Atul blushes, n Armaan smiles happily.)

Armaan: Tum darr kyun gaye? Bhoot aaya kya?

Anjali: Yeah...

Atul(flashing his light at the door again): Hmmm...par ab woh nahin hai 'Grin'

Armaan: Very good champ 'Wink'
Kaash Riddhima yahaan hoti.... 'dream' 'dream' 'dream' 'dream' 'dream'

Anjali: Aur phir tum dono shuru ho jaate.. '8-|'

Armaan(dreamily): Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....

Anjali: Waise tum yahaan kya kar rahe the? Tumhaari duty General Ward mein thi na?? Aur Ridzy kahaan hai?

Armaan(suddenly remembering): Mujhe Sister Lovely ne phone kiya tha...aur..

(Suddenly, the lights go on n Atul n Anjali laugh with relief. While they are talking to each other, Armaan rushes away to Riddhima to tell her that her dad is missing.)

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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Mon Apr 20, 2009 2:49 am

hehehe lol
omg i msd 2-3 parts,,,,,
caught up wid dem!!
was bttr 2 read in a flow!!
thnku lightened my mood!!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Mon Apr 20, 2009 3:35 am

xxRj reenoxx wrote:
hehehe lol
omg i msd 2-3 parts,,,,,
caught up wid dem!!
was bttr 2 read in a flow!!
thnku lightened my mood!!
updt nxt part asap!!


Lolzz....m trying to write 1 part everyday or in two days...exams going on na 'Razz' 'Razz'

Glad u liked it 'Happy' 'Happy'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Sat May 02, 2009 2:10 pm

Hey Adi.. finally am here to comment.! :-P

Omg 'rolling on the floor' 'rolling on the floor' the second part.. Haha.. Billy is so funny.shanky fainted 'rolling on the floor' 'rolling on the floor' lol.. And i love singh.! He is funny.!
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But i lovedddd lovely 'rolling on the floor' 'rolling on the floor' lovely and billy waah rab ne bana di jodi.! Lol
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'rolling on the floor' the fourth part and the chaos in the darkness LOL. I love shubhu and abhi.. Haha :lol:

I love your style of writing parallel stories for all couples lol

It seems real.. As if am watchin dmg.!! Imagine if you would have been the creative.. Dmg would have been so fun LOL.!!
Continue soon now am here.!! Haha..
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Sat May 02, 2009 2:45 pm

very funny part and interesting two cont
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PostSubject: Re: FF: All that's crazy ain't DMG...Part 5 Page 3 NEW UPDATE!!   Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:17 pm

Hey! Really sorry for the delay, but I have been having a tough time with all the assignments and stuff. Hope you guys will forgive me. Missed you all a lot!!! kiss kiss kiss


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Part 5

(Armaan meets Riddhima walking in the corridor.)

Ridz: Arey Armaan...main tumhein hi dhoondh rahi thi.

Armaan(forgets about Dr. Shashank): Achha? Mujhe toh laga tha tumhaari talaash kab ki khatam ho chuki hai.

Ridz(goes closer to him): Hmmm....woh toh hai.

(They look into each others’ eyes, but then she pushes him away.)

Tum kahaan the Armaan?

Armaan(still dazzled by her): Main..... (remembers Dr. Shashank and is immediately worried again)
Woh ghum ho gaye!!

Ridz: Kaun?

Armaan: Dr. Shashank..tumhaare dad.

Ridz: What??!!


(Meanwhile, the young man who had tripped over ‘something huge’ comes to, only to find himself staring into a pair of beautiful, concerned eyes...)

Lovely: Hello ji. Aap theek ho na? Aapka naam kya hai?

(She draws back, and he sees her properly for the first time. His eyes take in her ample proportions, and he falls deeper in love with her. The realisation shocks him.)

Man(dazed): Uhhhhhhhh....er...ermm...uhh...

Lovely: Oh ji kya hua? Main doctor ko bulaati hoon.

Man(quickly): Noooo!! Zaroorat nahin hai. Woh...erm....aap ho, mere liye yehi kaafi hai.

(Lovely is taken aback, but then she smiles at him, somehow knowing that he is the one she had always been looking for.)

Lovely(shyly): Ji ab toh apna naam bata do.

Man: Singh. Veer Singh. Aur aap?

Lovely: Lovely...Sister Lovely...

Veer(shocked): Sister??!!!!

Lovely(giggles): Oh ji...aapki sister nahin...main nurse hoon.

Veer: Phir theek hai.


(And they look into each others eyes and all the stuff that Armaan-Riddhima, Shubhankar-Kirti and Rahul-Muskaan do... Errrr....wait...did I say Rahul-Muskaan...............?!!)

When the lights come on Muskaan finds herself on the floor beside Rahul. They had crashed to the ground while fighting when the lights went off. Now they too were looking into each others eyes – but the look they shared was not one of love. It was a challenge. Though why they kept challenging each other they didn’t know. They just knew that they had to do it.

Rahul(coming to his senses): Moti uth mere upar se.

Muskaan: Moti kisko kaha pidde?

Rahul: Tujhe moti. Pata nahin kitne logon ka khaana akele khaati hai jo itni bhaari hai.

Muskaan: Haan haan...tujhe toh main bojh hi lagti hoon. Mat baat kar phir mujhse. (starts crying)

Rahul: Nahin Muskaan....aisa nahin hai. Tu meri dost hai. Aur main.....

Muskaan(softly): Aur main..?

Rahul: Bas ab rona band kar...kaam pe lag, warna Dr. Kirti hum logon ki jaan le legi.


(Muskaan tries to ask him what he had been about to say, but knows it is of no use. Rahul has shut himself off from her again.)

Ridz: Armaan, papa ko kahaan dhoondhein?

Armaan: I don’t know yaar...offices mein dekh liya....shaayad kisi ward mein hon. Par Nana ne kaha
woh aisi jagaah hain jahaan koi jaata nahin hai.

Ridz: Uh.....

(They look at each other, struck by an idea..)

Together: Path labs..??

(They run to the labs and see Dr. Shashank lying on the floor in the distance. Their relief soon turns to shock as they see the green guy coming out from the lab and bending over Dr. Shashank’s inert form....)

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