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miss.dollz
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Subject: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:11 am |
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Hii everyone... I am Dolly. New here invited by Prii but I've been here quite a while now. Just haven't been active now i am. I like writing mini, short, and big stories sometimes.
Characters: SM Members Family Name: Picasso
Henna = Mom Donny = Dad Resham = dadi sukhi = dada Reeno = 1st oldest daughter - 21 yrs old Prii = 2nd oldest daughter - 19 yrs old Rabia = 3rd oldest daughter - 16 yrs old Amrit = 4th youngest daughter - 10 yrs old Amby = 5th youngest daughter - 6 yrs old Pinky = 6th baby - 2 yrs old
*** We'll keep adding more family members as i get started. ***
The Picasso Family had 6 daighters. wow i know. The two oldest daughters Reeno and Prii were in college and had boyfriends but their parents didn't even know about. Rabia and Amrit were in high school and were very lazy in studies, always got into bad trouble in school. The youngest Amby was in middle school like a normal child and and baby Pinky was just home with her grandparents while the parents worked so hard. The mom was a nurse in the hospital and the dad was a plastic surgeon doctor. [LOL] .......
Index Parts: Part 1: Page 2 Part 2: Page 4
I'll continue asap. Please tell me your thoughts, and whatever you feel about this story.
Free to comment, criticise and whatever.
- Dolly
Last edited by miss.dollz on Sun May 24, 2009 2:49 am; edited 4 times in total
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:33 am |
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lolz Picasso family.. nice last name.. love it
haha henna da mom and donny da dad...
lmao reeno and me have bfs in college.. kool...
&& our youngest sisters Rabia & Amrit are bad girls in high school... that'll b fun to read...
awesome FF yaar.. please do continue. omgg cant wait for more...
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:36 am |
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Hawwwwwwwwwww...tuney mujhe dadi bana diya yaar....ha ha...never mind...good start...
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:37 am |
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- Prii_Loves_Mohit wrote:
- lolz Picasso family.. nice last name.. love it
haha henna da mom and donny da dad...
lmao reeno and me have bfs in college.. kool...
&& our youngest sisters Rabia & Amrit are bad girls in high school... that'll b fun to read...
awesome FF yaar.. please do continue. omgg cant wait for more... lolz.. yeah i wanted to make it funny as hell and bring back all the SM family together. at first my plans were making you and reeno bad but then i was like naaa... make the youngest bader....
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:38 am |
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- *Resham* wrote:
- Hawwwwwwwwwww...tuney mujhe dadi bana diya yaar....ha ha...never mind...good start...
sorry but don't worry your relationship with dada is funny and u guys are always fighting.... .gif" alt="!" longdesc="38" />
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Amrit
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:41 am |
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'' '' HD have 6 daughters n family is named is Picasso '' i think im gonna love reading this ')' nice idea tho dolly '' SM one big family..really love this title best of luck for this ff ':-bd'
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:44 am |
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- amrit23 wrote:
- '' '' HD have 6 daughters n family is named is Picasso ''
i think im gonna love reading this ')' nice idea tho dolly '' SM one big family..really love this title best of luck for this ff ':-bd' thanks for liking it Amrit. lolz yeah i wanted to make is funny so yh. just wait and watch for more fun. thanks again.
do post if u have any ideas or guesses whats gonna happen next?
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Pinky
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:47 am |
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Hey its really nice, me a 2 year old, loved it. Do continue
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 8:53 am |
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- Pinky wrote:
- Hey its really nice, me a 2 year old, loved it. Do continue
hey thnx....
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Henna
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 9:50 am |
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dada n dadi ki jodi cracking me up ''
Donny being a plastic surgeon is handy - kids can smash up who they like n donny will fix them up ')'
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xxreeBzxx
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 11:00 am |
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! :: lovd da start!!!!! dolly kya baat hai yaar!!!!!me nd amu bad in studies...acha....wait kar zara abhi dekhti hoon....lolz!!! kher lovd it!!!gr8 start...really lokin forward for it!!!!!!!!!!!!! lovd it alt!!!!do continue!!!!!
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:24 pm |
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- Henna wrote:
- dada n dadi ki jodi cracking me up ''
Donny being a plastic surgeon is handy - kids can smash up who they like n donny will fix them up ')' lolz..thanks for liking it
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:25 pm |
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- xxreeBzxx wrote:
- wowwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! :: lovd da start!!!!!
dolly kya baat hai yaar!!!!!me nd amu bad in studies...acha....wait kar zara abhi dekhti hoon....lolz!!! kher lovd it!!!gr8 start...really lokin forward for it!!!!!!!!!!!!! lovd it alt!!!!do continue!!!!! lolz i like making nice into mean ppl.. thanks for liking it.
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-AreenA-
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:23 am |
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oyeeeeee!!!!!! hehehehe im da oldest????? LMAO.... BTW real mien Prii is older 2 me lekin im satisfied wid my character though! hehe..... ek baat suno.... mera boyfrnd will be only Iqbal Khan ya phir Arjun Bijlani acha!!! hehe
i LUVD the intro... cont asap!! Billi nd Don... mom nd dad hahahaha.... sun, plz cont asap.... koooool idea!!
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nitya
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Wed Apr 08, 2009 9:10 am |
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haa it is really nice esp dada-dadi jodi
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:15 am |
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One day Reeno & Prii get their new cell phones (iphones) and their younger siblings gets all jealous and start watching Prii & Reeno how they use their cell phones. Prii & Reeno are majoring in Fashion Designing and they leave for college in their old bicycles so they say good bye to their mom and dad. By the time they reach near the pond their boyfriends who are brothers (Arjun & Mohit) are waiting in their red hot convertables. Arjun and Mohit wave at Prii & Reeno and the sisters hug and kissed their bfs and left. Meanwhile, at home the high school and middle schools students had no school because they were on Easter Vacation for 5 days. They all tortured dada and dadi to play volleyball outside with them. It was nice warm and sunny day. While dadi was making her hot yummy garam masala soup for dada, which dada didn't like her soup, he hated it bcoz she put alot of masala in it and spinach. After it was done, they all sat down for lunch and when dadi went out to check mail, dada poured her soup inside a flower pot and when she came back, he said im all done. lets go out to play now. dadi was looking like something was suspiciously looking. The kids and dada went out to play volleyball while dadi was sitting outside with Pinky sewing a scarf for her son (dad). Mom and dad already left for work early in the morning around 7am. ***Will continue soon***
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:30 am |
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Ha ha....nice one dear....gosh....dunno how this will end up to my image ha ha
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-AreenA-
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:45 am |
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hehehehe omg.... me nd ajju hug!!!.... haha.... nd cellphones huh!... -------> bstst thingg dat cud happn in a FIC!! yaar BHT chota hai.... thora longg karo...!!!
amazingg updt cont soon!!
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-AreenA-
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:48 am |
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^Reshu: dont wry bout ur img..... sab ki SAB pata hai )
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Amrit
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Thu Apr 09, 2009 8:54 am |
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was nice part yaar ')' keep writing reshu sew ache scarfs ok ')'
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miss.dollz
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Thu Apr 09, 2009 9:50 am |
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lolz thanx guys.. will make it bigger soon.
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:14 am |
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Lols amu...will try to sew...see this is how m getting imaged...and u guys...
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Rah
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Thu Apr 09, 2009 3:13 pm |
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Henna and Donny Picasso?? '' '' with 6 daughters?? '' '' Resh as Dadi?? '' ''woh bhi stitching??? '' '' OMG!! '' '' '' '' I already love ittt!!!lagi raho 'clap' ...can't wait to see what they get up to!! '' ''
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Henna
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Thu Apr 09, 2009 3:23 pm |
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bigadi hui olaad... '' yehi sab sikhaya hai tum dono ko? ')'
rotten andhe I have for kids.. :cheers: yay... donny's fault!
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xxreeBzxx
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Subject: Re: FF: SM One Big Family [Part3 p6/7] Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:31 am |
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wowwww gr8 part reeno nd prii man yu guyz r sooo lcky!!!!!!!!!!!!
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