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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?  Fri Jan 23, 2009 7:56 am |
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@Verni: Thnk u so much...I dont think I will be able to write today...buzy packing my stuff...bt will make for it as soon as I come back....
@Sonu: Thx sweets...glad u liked it...
@Rahi: Thx dear...glad u too loved it...
@Poo: Thx sweets...founded interesting...he he...
@Nitz: Thx dear...nice to see it was interesting...
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nitya
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Wed Jan 28, 2009 12:38 am |
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reshu agla part kaab?
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:43 am |
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@Nitz: Will write soon..maybe on weekends..too buzy!!
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sonalisaxena
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:26 am |
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kahaan jaa rahe didi?..
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Henna
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Wed Jan 28, 2009 12:14 pm |
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------ Moderators Note: ------
Seeing as we now have the appropriate forum
to house your fanfic, :cheers: this thread shall be
moved to the Kumkum section.
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:23 pm |
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@Sonu: Kahi nahi jaa rahi hoon re....its just tht too much work on this side...
@Henna: Thx fr moving this here...its more adorable now!!
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Thu Jan 29, 2009 1:18 am |
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hmmmmmmm..... likho naaaaaaa...
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Rah
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Thu Jan 29, 2009 2:05 am |
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Intezaar...intezaar..intezaar...haan intezaar : ):
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Thu Jan 29, 2009 11:31 pm |
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Gals pls be patient....I will write on weekends!! Too much work..nt even gettting completed...  :
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:13 am |
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Okk me back as promised...verni nw u can write ur ff..this blackmailing doesnt work always but... : :
Months pass by and Kk is all set in the office as well as at home grounds. She had become the most lovable member in Panditji’s house. An adorable daughter for Panditji and Amma…and lovable sister to Punnu (Panditji & Amma’s daughter).
In the office, Kk had really worked for her job…she truly became one of the most sincere and adorable member in the office too…her group extended to loads of friends in the office…and her colleagues who respected her from heart.
Kk got her own cabin to rest…and that’s what she ever dreamt of. She also took keen interest in architecture. And her work was well appreciated by one and all…this new achievement she could achieve because of her colleague cum friend…Rashmi. Rashmi became a close confident for Kk and vice versa.
Her progress was well accepted by one and all and the only witness to see her growth was Sumit Wadhwa. He very well knew that Kk is sharp and to the point, does her business well enough and is proven right. He loved her work…and the core…that she is fully committed for her work. He had seen a different side of Kk in these months.
Kk too had sensed that Sumit is not the person she first saw in the railway compartment. He was genuine and kind. Her impression of him was of a good and an able boss, for whom the work is worship and humanity stands apart. She respected and adored her boss for the same reason.
This adorable relationship could have carried for a longer time when…one incident shocked this relationship and made it to ruins.
In the morning wee hours, an old age factory worker in the Wadhwa companies while working had burnt his hands. Kk was standing near the factory for collection of papers concerning with the daily outcome of the factory.
She was waiting for the person to hand over her these documents, when she heard one big loud sound of someone which cracked her heart.
Everyone started running inside the factory and there was a huge chaos amidst around.
Kk started looking at the crowd and got worried.
She asked one of the people running inside: “Kya hua…sab kyun bhaag rahe hain”
The person replied back: “Woh andar…” and he rushed inside.
Kk got anxious and she could not stop herself from going inside.
She entered inside and into the crowd and came to a big ground kind of thing within the premises, and she was taken aback.
The person with all the blood stained on his body was lying unconscious and restless.
Kk on seeing him said: Arey koi toh uthao inhey…
She came near him and turned him around and was shocked to see him.
Kk: Raghu chacha…
She got restless and started saying: Arey koi paani le aana…uthao inhey…koi ambulance bulao…
But no one moved from their position.
Kk could not understand this, she was quite amuzed by the behaviour of these people.
She blurted out: “Koi kuch toh kaho…arey yeh sab kaise hua…uthao naa inhey…inki jaan jaa sakti hai…humein inhein hospital le jaana hoga”
But still no one moved. This time she got angry and spoke: “Aap log kyun nahi hilte…arey…yahan koi mar raha hai…aur aap”
But still there was no movement. Kk on seeing this got angrier and went outside the factory. She only knew at the moment that she had to take steps urgently to save the man.
She spotted one car at the factory entrance which was recently parked upon and the keys were inside, someone had forgotten about it…she looked at this…and without any further thoughts…went inside and single handedly picked up the man in her arms…and made him to relax inside the car.
She started the car and buzzed off to the nearby hospital.
Everyone just looked at the entire situations like nerds. But one thing all were thinking and some person blurted out “Kya hoga agar Sumit Wadhwa ko is baat ka pata chalega”
Meanwhile, Kk reached to the hospital and laid the man on the stretcher. She managed to admit the man to the hospital and reach out to his emergencies.
On assurance of the doctors that the man will be fine enough, as she has brought him on time…she left the hospital…for the office.
On coming near the office premises she got one more shock of her life when everyone was gathered around near the grounds and one man was waiting for her for answers.
She came closer and wondered why everyone is serious and why the situation is so tight.
She moved more closer and caught Su Wadhwa standing in front of her…she got a little relaxed…she thought he would understand everything now…
She in that confidence moved towards him…
Kk: Sir…
She was about to say more but Sumit stopped her saying anything further…
He raised his hand above her and Kk on seeing him got stand still in front of him…her feet frozed on seeing him in this manner…
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poorvi
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:10 am |
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awsome reshu......very well written :applause:
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nitya
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Jan 31, 2009 9:55 am |
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reshu very well written mager su ko gussa?humm kis liya
cont soon
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:00 am |
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Oyeeeee... abhi kyun roka... hmmmmmm.... um um um um... likho naaa.. plzzzzz... ab sirf weekends pe likhogi to we shud get compensation naaa... do-teen parts likhooo...
Sumit ne haath uthaya... ummm.. i find something fishy yahan bhi....
neways... it was very well written n executed...
muuaaaaaaahhhh
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sonalisaxena
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Feb 01, 2009 2:52 am |
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Good one didi..!!
M just wondering if sumit's shocked or angry
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:00 am |
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@Poo: Thx dear....glad u liked it.. 
@Nitz: Su ko gussa....dekhte jao  .gif" alt=" !" longdesc="38" /> ...thx dear...
@Verni: Sth fishy....hmm guess guess  ....and will try to write in this week...wait wait...thx dear ...
@Sonu: Thx dear ....
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Rah
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Feb 02, 2009 12:04 am |
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Excellent part Resh :applause: ...it reminds me of that scene from Laadla where Anil Kapoor takes the man to the hospital in Sridevi's car and she's absolutely furious coz she's so arrogant and is angry that her car got spoilt with blood without caring about the harm to the person :#-o: ....I just hope Sumit is not too angry :-SS:
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Feb 02, 2009 6:28 am |
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@Rahi: I was thinking tht why someone didnt thought of it....good..well lets see....whts in store!!
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nitya
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:44 pm |
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haa i thought abt itt bt again i thought sumit cannt bee like sredavi soo dropped tht idea
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Feb 02, 2009 11:55 pm |
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Nitz: Dont be so sure....he he....
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Feb 08, 2009 7:31 am |
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Kk just stood standstill, and every other member present there was worried as what is going to happen.
But…Su raises his hand and yells on Kk saying “Tumne yeh sab akele…kyun?”
Kk wanted to say, rather explain to him and so she tries to say: Sir…
But Su again stops her and says: “Kk, tumhe kuch ho jaata ismein…tumhe andaza hai…”
Kk gets confused…and again wants to say something.
Everyone is still looking at this conversation with eager eyes.
Su holds Kk’s hand and takes her in between the people. And he addresses to all of the people there: “Is ladki ne jo kiya woh wakai kabile taarif tha…isney insaaniyat jatayi…apne dada ki umar ke insaan ko yeh apni parwah na karte hue aspatal lekar gayi…yeh tak nahi socha…ke uske aisa karne sey kuch galat toh nahi hoga…jo kaam isney kiya woh aapmein se koi bhi kar sakta tha…lekin humein toh bas tamasha dekhna aata hai…hai naa?”
Everyone in the crowd looks down while Kk’s eyes get moist and she continues to look at him.
Su continues: “Is ladki ne apni parwah nahi ki…apni jaan ki bhi nahi…aur jo insaan wakai yeh insaaniyat nibhana jaanta hai…wohi meri nazron mein insaan kehlane ke laayak hai…” “Khair, mujhe kisise kuch nahi kehna…lekin agli baar agar aisa kuch ho jaaye…toh apne aap ko nahi toh kam se kam mujhe zaroor jaga dena…main nahi so sakta naa…meri zimmedari hai aap log, yeh company…kyunki aage shaayad bhagwan naa karein aisa kuch ho jaaye aur Kk rahe yaa na bhi rahe…aap log toh insaaniyat nibhane se rahein…theek keh raha hoon naa main”
Everyone really looks down, with an awful guilt in their mind, because it was Sumit who was speaking to them, that person whom they had always loved, always adored, and for them who earned respect in their eyes.
Kk once thought at the entire proceedings that this situation will spoil her relationship with Su, this relationship will go in ruins…all of them thought too…present there…but everyone was pleasantly surprised with this change…this situation didn’t worsen any possibilities of a newly developed relationship between Sukk…but it tied one strong unknown bind between them.
In the midst of this…Su took Kk along with him into his cabin, and he made her comfortable.
Su: “Tum theek ho naa…”
Kk: Haan Sir, main theek hoon…thank you…
Su: Paani…
Kk: No sir…thanks once again!!
Su: “Arey please no thanks, infact mujhe tumhe thank you bolna chahiye…Kk gets surprised on hearing this”. But Su just continues…”pata hai mujhe aaj bahut khushi hui hai…?”
Kk: Khushi?
Su: Haan khushi…aaj tumne mujhe yakeen dila diya…ke meri tarah sochne wala bhi is duniya mein koi hai…
Kk gets surprised by this confession and so she asks: “Jee…
Su covers himself after discovering what he has just said…
Su: Ek baat poochoon…
Kk: Jee…
Su: Raghu Kaka ab kaise hai?
Kk: Jee woh ab theek hai…main ghar jaate jaate hospital hokar aaongi…
Su: Main bhi chaloonga tumhare saath…
Kk: Jee aap…
Su: Haan main…mujhe unhey milna hai…woh mere employee hai…lekin ussey badhkar woh mere liye mere buzurg hai…mere pita samaan hai…bahut purane employee hai…wwoh is office ke…papa kaa bahut bada maan hai wohhh…isliye…
Kk just keeps on listening this with respect. And she says: “Zaroor challenge Sir”
Su smiles…Kk gets up to leave from his cabin…”Acha Sir…main chaloon”
Su: Haan…
Kk: Kaam baaki hai mera…Sir…hum shaam ko chalte hai…
Su: Haan chalengee…
Kk walks from his cabin…and she turns back…to see Su…and she smiles back to him…
Su too smiles at her…and says “See you in the evening…take care”
Kk: Jee…Sir…
And she walks off from his cabin with a smile, and he too relaxes on his seat without realizing that he is happy with Kk’s moves.
And he continues saying in his mind: “Yeh ladki wakai alag hai…thodi si naadan hai…par bahut achi hai…”
Here Kk too while walking the corridor keeps smiling and says: “Su Sir…aap bahut ache hai, wakai bahut ache hai..jitna socha tha…ussey kahi zyada badhkar paaya hai maine aapko…you are really the best and good human being I have met in my entire life”
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poorvi
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Feb 08, 2009 7:41 am |
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tooo guddd resh.awsome yaar...wonderfully written :applause: :applause: :applause:
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nitya
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Feb 08, 2009 8:20 am |
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it was really unexpected reshu jo socha tha ulta hogya
cont next part
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Feb 08, 2009 8:38 am |
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hmm... jaisa socha tha wahi hua.... bohut sweet scene tha...... write soon...
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Feb 08, 2009 11:31 pm |
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@Poo: Thank u dear....
@Nitu: Thx sweets...
@Verni: U knew it...he he....thx dear!!
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Rah
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| Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Feb 09, 2009 4:37 am |
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Great part Resh...the bonding is abhi se hi itni cute hai aage tho can't waiiiitttttttt :Dream: :Dream: ...and am so glad Sumit wasn't the 'understand?u'd better understand' type! :: ...so sweet of him to do taarif sabke saamne....awwww 
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