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FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?

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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Wed Mar 25, 2009 7:33 am

hey..!!Nice one didi..

erm..its was hot..!!LOL

Do write only when ur PCis fyn..

par dont stress urself..
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:53 am

@Verni: Thank u....glad u liked it....

@Sonu: Thx sweets..was writing this keeping u in mind...he he....and yes gals my pc is fine now....aah
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:49 am

Congos Resh...ur PC's back '\:d/'

About the latest part, haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii main tho gayeeeeeee...sachi main 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' abhi jab can't see SuKk new scenes, the FFs are keeping me going....excellently depicted romantic shuruat Resh 'clap' 'clap' ...wanting moreee now 'blush' 'blush' 'blush' 'blush'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Mar 26, 2009 8:13 am

@Rahi: Awwwwwwwwww...thnk u so much sweets....I knw after the show these things only connect us to Sukk....yeah got my pc back...praying it stays....he he
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:38 am

first time im reading this ff reshu n its lovely..so romantic 'love struck' 'dream'
amazing yaar 'clap'
continue soooooooooooooooooooooon 'Grin'
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:45 am

how romantic......passionate......im still dreaming this whole part......if u r gonna write these kinda wonderfull parts frm university..then always write frm there only..hehe

waiting for nxt one eagerly!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Mar 27, 2009 4:41 am

@Amu: Thx dear...glad u liked it....

@Poo: Yeah tht one I wrote frm univ....ha ha...will try to write soon now....thx dear
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:34 am

The morning:

Kk checks in her office a little late tht morning....and Su spots her....

He calls her inside his cabin....

Kk: I am sorry...I got a little late...

Su: Actually I am sorry....

Kk: Aap Sorry kyun bol rahe hai....

Su: Kal jo bhi hua kk.....woh...

Kk: Woh kya Sir....

She gets a little scared to hear these words...the last thing she wanted to hear was tht entire incident was not a true one....

Su: Tumhare ghar par kisine kuch kaha...

Kk: Nahi...not actually....maine kuch zyada kaha nahi..bas itna hi kahan ke emergency thi...isliye rukna pada....

Su: Koi sawal nahi uthaye...?

Kk: Nahi....maine samhal liya...lekin...har baar jhooth nahi bol paaongi...unka bharosa nahi tod paaongi....

Su: Aage se tumhe jhooth bolna nahi hoga.....

Kk: Matlab....

Su: Kk...kal raat main jazbaaton mein tumhe apne dil ki baatein bata gaya....par sach kahoon...jo bhi hua woh galat nahi hua....main wakai tumse pyar....

He looks at her....and she smiles....

Kk: Pyar toh shayad main bhi aapse karti hoon...agar nahi karti toh kal main aapko apne kareeb aane ki ijaazat nahi deti....

Su comes close to her....and passes off her to the door....he closes the door....comes near the phone and instructs his secy...not to disturb him for half an hour atleast...

He comes near her now...and holds her from her waist....

Kk closes her eyes...once again after feeling his touch...

He brings her more closer towards him...and gives first a kiss on her earlobes...bites it a bit...Kk closes her eyes tightly...

He then kisses her eyes....her nose...her cheeks...and then places a hard kiss on her lips...

Kk gives up to him yet again....

Su goes on kissing her neck...and this time more passionately....

Kk loses herself into his arms....and just wanted that this time should not go....

Bt then she holds herself back...and releases herself frm his arms...

Kk: Sir...please...

Su: Kk...tumhe jaanne ke baad...parakhne ke baad....aisa lagta hai ke tumhe sirf pyar karta rahoo..yeh nasha utarne ka naam hi nahi leta.....

He plays with her hair....and holds her again tightly in his arms...

Su: Kk....mujhse shaadi karogi?

Kk just looks at him....and doesnt speak anything....

Su: Kk...kuch toh kaho....

Kk is still silent....doesnt move a bit from her place....

Su shakes her up and calls her again...Kk Kk....

Kk finally comes into her senses...and realizes tht she is standing in his cabin....had come to apologize fr being late...and the entire thing which she felt was her only dream....which she had been scared of seeing...

Kk: Hun,.....

Su: Main tumse kya pooch raha hoon....

Kk: Kuch kaha apne Sir...

Su: Chodo Kk....hum baad mein baat karte hai....

He moves away from her,....and Kk is numb in her thought process...doesnt know whts right and whts wrong..whts dream and whts reality...she is just unmoved....standing there like a stone....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Wed Apr 01, 2009 3:20 am

Excellent part Resh....wish it hadn't been a dream though!!! scratch ...par getting more curious now...kuchh hua...pyar hogaya...ab mazaa aayega :wink:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:58 am

excellent part reshu
hope it turns true soon
cont soon
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Wed Apr 01, 2009 10:58 am

@Rahi: Glad u appreciated this....well dreams are dreams naa...he he

@Nitz: Thx sweets....lets see...whether her dreams are true or no...he he
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:16 am

@ reshu : pata hai... duno why m so confused after reading this write-up... m confused abt Sumit's behaviour and Kumkum's too..
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Apr 02, 2009 8:04 am

@Verni: Hmmmm....well lets see wht comes next then..bt thx sweetie.....fr giving an honest opinion....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Apr 04, 2009 10:58 am

Confused matlab... this is really different .. i had a very different feeling after reading it... I mean... the concept is awesome bchchaaaaa
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Apr 04, 2009 11:32 am

Ohhhh...this is the confusion kya verni....then u better be confused....he he...thx fr appreciating yaar....and haan kya hua hai tujhe....tu theek nahi hai kya....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Apr 04, 2009 11:49 am

I just went through few of the chapters...really nice wud catch up

Btw CK... That Avi so doesnt suit u useless
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sun Apr 05, 2009 2:14 am

HCCCCCCCCCCCCCC...U here....welcome shelcome...I mmm soooooooooooo happy to c u here...muwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...hugs...

And really thx fr appreciating my ff.....thx thx so much....

And if my Avi doesnt suit me...then ur login name doesnt suit u..useless...he he...

Muwahhhhhhhhhhhhh....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:00 am

agla part reshu
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:09 am

Nitz will write most prob tom....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Apr 23, 2009 1:26 am

[b]Sorry gals writing after a long part...for those who are following it..will knw wht m writing...fr those who will be new at it since it has been shifted here frm the Kumkum forum do have a look and give the opinions.... :grin:

All r welcome to read it...



The entire day goes disturbing for Kk as she doesnt understand why Su behaved like that 'Sad' ....she gets more disturbed saying that whatever the moments she had with Su last night were real 'Sad' ...or was it just a pretension. 'Sad' ...the sweet moments she had with Su were a farce ones.... 'Sad'

Her mind is more perturbed with all the events and the entire moments with Su falls like a passing picture to her.... '8-|'

She is lost in her thoughts when her office peon disturbs her thinking process...

"Madam...madam..."

Kk gets moved by the call and says: "Hun...

"Madam Sumit Sir ne apko bulaya hai"

Kk: Hmm...

Kk covers herself up, still doesnt knw hw to react over the proceedings and moves towards Sumit's cabin...

She enters the cabin very formally this time....as if some decisions were striking her mind.... 'Happy'

Kk: "May I come in Sir..."

Su: Yes Come in....

Kk:" Aapne bulaya....

Su: Haan baitho kk....

Kk sits down and is ready for the conversation...more than that she is ready to hear her work orders now....

Su: "Kuch der pehle jab main tumse baat kar raha tha...toh tum khoyi hui thi...."

Kk: "Haan kuch sochne lagi thi...."

Su: "Khwab dekh rahi thi kya"

Kk: "Lagta toh hai..."

Su: " Matlab..." 'Unsure'

Kk gets bolder in her words and decides to throw herself up in the convo... 'Happy'

Kk: Sir..kal raat jo hua...woh aapko wakai yaad nahi yaa fir aap jatana nahi chahte...

Su: Tum aise kyun keh rahi hoo....

Kk: Kyunki subah hote hi..apka rawaiya kuch aur keh gaya mujhe... 'Sad'

Su: Rawaiya...kk tum hosh mein ho tum kya keh rahi hoo... 'Sad'

Kk: Haan shayad ab hosh mein hi hoon....kya kal raat jo bhi hua...ab tak jo bhi humare beech hota gaya kya woh sirf ek haadsa tha.... 'sigh'

Su gets up frm his chair, a little disturbed bt doesnt say a word.... 'Sad('

Kk: Dekhiye Sir...agar humare beech jo bhi hota gaya woh sirf haadsa tha toh saaf saaf keh dijiye....kal jo bhi hua woh sirf ek pal ka ittefaq tha...yeh bhi bata dijiye....aur yeh bhi keh dijiye ke humare beech jo kuch bhi maine samjha hai woh kabhi tha hi nahi..... 'Sad'

Kk: Taaki main aur koi khwab dekhne ke jurrat na karun....koi sapna meri aankhon se ab naa guzare..... 'Sad'

Su turns back and says: Agar tum jaanna chahti hoo...sunna chahti ho...toh yehi sach hai...woh sach jo tumne kaha.... 'Sad(' 'broken heart'

Kk gets too emotional....bt doesnt show up on her face....her heart had been already into pieces.... 'broken heart' 'broken heart'

Kk gets up from her chair and starts to move out....

Su stops her seeing this and asks: Kk...tum jaa rahi hoo...

Kk: Ab kehne ke liye kuch hai nahi sir...toh mujhe jaana chahiye naa....aap koi kaam ho toh keh dijiye....warna....main chalti hoon...waise bhi ek employee agar zyada der tak uske boss ke cabin mein bewajah se rahe toh baatein galat nikalti hain....aur main nahi chahti ke main apne aap ko kho doon.... 'broken heart' 'Serious'

She moves outside the cabin...tears very well in her eyes, but covers up wholeheartedly and goes to start her work.... 'Sad'

Here Su is all alone with himself thinking of Kk's words and her and speaks up: "Tumhe kya kahoon Kk....kaise kahoon tumhe kuch bhi,.....main nahi chahta ke tum is raaste pe chalo mere saath..." 'Sad'

Unknowingly tears pass off frm his eyes too...and he gets a call fr the scheduled meeting...he gets ready for the same as if few moments back nth had been called for....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Apr 24, 2009 2:24 am

Fantabulous part Resh :cheers: Now am even more curious to know what's Sumit's secret bounce plz ab jaldi update karna!! :wink:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Apr 24, 2009 6:08 am

Glad u liked it rahi...will update soon....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Apr 24, 2009 12:35 pm

now more suspence to read about su secreat
cont soon reshu
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Apr 25, 2009 3:54 am

Thx nitz.....su's secret..well hmmm
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:27 am

jus dont tell me k sumit is having BT 'Shock'
hope k iske ilawa koi aur secret ho sumit ka '#:-S'
awesome part reshu 'Grin' waiting to know reason for su's strange behaviour n kk's equally strange answer
continue sooon ok 'Grin'
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