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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Apr 25, 2009 10:46 pm |
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@Amu: He he...dont wry...BT nahi hai....disease nahi hai Kk show ke tarah...ha ha.... Thx fr loving it....
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poorvi
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Apr 27, 2009 10:37 am |
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awsome part reshu....jaldi likhna....cant wait to know abt su's secret
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:07 am |
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Thx poo....will try to write soon....
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sonalisaxena
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:47 am |
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Luved it didi..!!
Sorry for the extra late comment.Had read long tym bak but cudnt reply..!!
Well, Kumkum's correct..Lets wait for wait sumit has to say..!
Do try n update soon
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*Resham*
Crazy Painter
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:11 am |
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Awwwwwwww sonu glad u liked it....will try to write soon
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Jul 13, 2009 4:51 am |
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hey good work. plz continue soon.
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nitya
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:30 pm |
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reshu zaaldi say cont
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:54 am |
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oh wow write asap.
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:47 am |
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@Prii, Nitz: Will try really to write soon...really soon...
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Fri Aug 07, 2009 4:21 pm |
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aare hurry up yaar... its been ages since i read ur FF....
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Aug 08, 2009 6:45 am |
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Okk writing it again...dont knw wht happens after I write up a part...nways...here it is:
Few days had been passed..and Sukk are involved in daily routine of themselves...Kk had taken a leave of 10 days and has gone back to her hometown .
Su though he didnt wished tht Kk take a leave doesnt say a word on her leave application and allows her to go ..
There meanwhile on her short break.. Kk does everything to forget all the incidents which has happened with her alongwith Su ...bt keeps on remembering him in every small way ...
This sunset too she was holding herself and remembering Su when some noises disturb her ....
She goes back to her house and sees tht some people have come in to meet Mamiji...
Mamiji: Aaiyee aaiyee...baithiye naa...
Kk sees the guests from behind her room...and stands apart...
A lady guest: Aaj bahut dinon ke baad hum miley hai...Kk ke Mamaji nazar nahi aa rahe hai....
Mamiji: Jee bas woh aate hi honge...
Mamaji too steps inside and joins the conversation...
Mamaji: Bahut acha laga aap aa gaye hai...
One of the male guests: Jee humein toh aana hi tha...
Mamaji: Kuch khaas kaam tha...
That male guest: Jee kuch aisa hi samajh lijiye...Dar asal baat yeh hai...ke hum aapke ghar ek khaas maqsad ke saath aaye hai...
Mamaji and Mamiji are confused...
Mamaji: Khaas maqsad...
That male guest: Jee...Kk nahi hai...
Mamiji: Jee woh bahar gayi hai...magar kk se kya kaam?
Tht female guest: Jee dar asal baat yeh hai ke hum chahte hai ke aapki Kk humare ghar aa jaye...
Both of them are confused now...
Mamaji: Aapke ghar? Kyun kuch khas hai?
Tht female guest: Nahi aap samjhe nahi...humara ek bhanja hai...shehar mein rehta hai...bahut bada aadmi hai...apna karobar hai...aur apne kartab se uska bada naam bhi hai ....
Mamaji: Jee....toh...
Tht male guest: Toh hum chahte hai...hum aapse Kk kaa haath mangna chahte hai humare bhanje ke liye...
Mamaji and Mamiji are stunned on hearing this ...and Kk who is there all along this conversation from behind just goes on becoming silent and is standstill there ...she has no expressions to even emote ...
The conversation continues:
Mamaji: Lekin....
Tht female guest: Humein aapki Kk bahut pasand hai..hum usey dekhte aaye hai..uske baare mein har sach hum jante hai..aur isliye chahte hai..ke usey apni bahu banaye....humare bhanje ke liye ussey badhkar koi nahi ho sakti ...
Mamaji: Dekhiye aapka sujhav acha hai...lekin...
Tht female guest: Aap kk se baat kijiye...agar woh haan karti hai toh hi hum aagey badhenge....
Tht male guest: Hum ummeed karenge ke yeh rishta ho jaaye....yakeen maniye is rishtey se kisika nuksaan nahi hoga....
Mamaji: Humein kuch waqt chahiye...
Female guest: Aap jitna waqt chahte hai..utna le lijiye....
Male guest: Toh hum chalein...
Both of them take their leave and walks away...
Mamaji and Mamiji are so moved that they dont know wht to say ...they look at each other for a while and then realizes tht Kk is standing behind them with expressions unmoved ....
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Verni
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:03 pm |
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Bhanja... ehem ehem.... khair I wont say anything abt future...
This part was.. the filler... aage kab likhegi???
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:49 am |
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no future? wow beautifully written reshuu.. keep it up and continue asap..
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:49 am |
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@Vernu: Seems like u sensed everything... ..nways...wd write soon..thx fr appreciating...
@Prii: Thx fr appreciating yaar...wd write soon
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Rah
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Aug 10, 2009 6:52 am |
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hmmmm...something something is falling in place..good good Rolfy..aage bharo...jaldi likhna...cant wait to see what happens next
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:00 am |
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@Rah: Its soooooooooooooo good to c u here yaar:* ....wd def write soon now....thx fr appreciating it dear
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Amrit
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Thu Aug 13, 2009 4:57 am |
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i hope this bhanja is someone good looking and handsome guy continue soon reshu
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Thu Aug 13, 2009 7:47 am |
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@Amu: He surely will be shayad... wd write soon....thx dear
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Fri Aug 14, 2009 12:18 pm |
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add sum funny scenes in it
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Sat Aug 15, 2009 5:47 am |
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@Prii: Its hard to do tht yaar...
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nitya
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:26 am |
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i am here thoda late hogayi reshu good to see u back in writting mode humm something i can sense in future fr kk cont soon
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*Resham*
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Subject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path? Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:16 am |
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@Nitz: Glad to c u here too...thx sweets fr appreciating...
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