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FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?

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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:35 pm

awwwww reshuuuu such a sweetttttttttt storyyy...loveddd it absolutelyyy Grin
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:37 pm

@Anku: Thnchuuuu sweets :hug: ..so nice to c u backk here.... :hug:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:36 am

Waiting waiting.... waiting waiting... jaldi likho jaldi likho..... bounce bounce
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:18 am

@Verni..nw u too started bounching...good good... :rolling on the floor:

Okk here comes the next part:

Kumkum comes outside and Mamiji asks her to stand in front of her. She blesses her and wishes her good luck ahead.

Unknowingly tears flow down from Kk’s eyes as she was going for a long time apart from them. But Mamaji assures her that she is going just to make her dream realize and she should think of that only.

He further continues: Dekh Kk, wahan apna khayal rakhna…tujhe lene Panditji aayenge, unse meri saari baatein ho chuki hai, mere purane dost hai woh, woh aur unki patni bhale insaan hai, unhone teri zimmedari lene ke taiyyari jatayi hai…isliye main chintit nahi hoon…

Kk: Par Mamaji unhein meri zyada diggat toh nahi hogi naa…

Mamaji: Nahi beta, unhonein tujhe dekha hai, tu chotisi thi tabse, tujhe shayad woh log itna yaad nahi honge, jab unsey milegi toh sab jaan jayegi, unhein tujhse koi pareshani nahi hogi aur hai, bus tu bhi…

Kk: Mamaji, aapka bharosa tootne nahi doongi, main apni wajah se koi pareshani nahi aane doongi…

Mamiji: Acha kk, tuney yeh toh bataya ke tu Mumbai jaa rahi hai, lekin sirf naukri ke liye agar jaa rahi hai, toh tu yahan bhi toh kar sakti hai naa…

Kk: Mamiji, main jaanti hoon, lekin main dekhna chahti hoon ke har sapna poora karnewali Mumbai, mere sapnon ko poora karti hai yaa nahin, maine jab application di thi, toh isi irade se di thi Mamiji, ab mujhe kya pata tha ke itni jaldi call aa jayega…aur unhein mera profile pasand aayega…

Mamiji: Acha yeh toh bata kaunsi company hai?

Kk: Maine bataya toh tha…

Mamaji: Agar firse batayegi, toh kya jayega beta?

Kk: Acha Mamiji, ab likh ke bhi Lena…main Wadhwa Groups ki naukri ke liye jaa rahi hoon…bahut badi company hai…bada naam hai iska…aaye din iske naam ki gunj hoti hai…sab tay hai…lagbhag sab final ho chukka hai, ek aakhri round hai, aur uske baad selection aur woh bhi pucca wala..aur agar nahi mila…toh naukri ka anth toh nahi hoga naa..dhoondh loongi…lekin pata nahi kyun mujhe lagta hai ke yeh naukri mujhe hi milegi…meri manzil hai yeh…She smiles looking at her and again puts question: “ aur kuch Mamiji…?

Mamiji: Nahi beta…Ishwar karein aur tere kanha karein tu jo chahe paa jaye…bas apna khayal rakhna…and both of them smile.

Mamaji: Ab suniyeji, humein jaane dijiye, badi der ho jayegi warna…

She takes blessings from both, and Mamaji takes her to drop till the station.

Mamiji prays to God and says: Is bachchi ka khayal rakhna…isey iski manzil se milwa Dena…and just mutters…Wadhwa Groups…
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:26 am

which one is kumkum's actual manzil di?..wadhwa grp or Mr Wadhwa?.. :Wink): :Wink): :Wink): :Wink):

Nice part..do write soooooooonn...kaho toh main reminders dene shuru karoon?..
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Mon Jan 12, 2009 11:17 pm

Hey sonu,

Ppl r smart enough naa to understand...:rolling on the floor::rolling on the floor::rolling on the floor:

Haan deh doh reminders....:rolling on the floor::rolling on the floor::rolling on the floor:..thx in between Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:55 am

Wowweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....Wadhwa Groups!!!! :applause: ...great going Resh!!..of cos samajh main aagaya...hamari aankhen ab Mr. Wadhwa ko hi doond rahi hai :Wink:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:31 am

Oye hoye oye hoye..... Wadhwas aa gaye..... bounce :sunny: ....

Haan reshu hum log sab samajh gaye...

the part was nice one... will be eagerly waiting for Kumkum to reach Mumbai... and meet Mr. Wadhwa...ehem ehem.. Mr. Sumit Wadhwa.. :batting eyelashes: agar tu koi twist beech mein nahi laayi to... :geek:

Sonu tu lagi reh.. reminders dene mein... warna yeh late lateef bhool jaayegi....
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:12 am

@Rahi: I knw everyone out here is too smart:)): ....just keep on the track wht happens next:batting eyelashes: ...thnchuuuuuuu...:hug:

@Verni: Twist...ehem...cant say naa:blush: ...nways thnchu fr loving it:blush: ...and haan m nt late lateef:batting eyelashes: ..bas thodi si lazy hoon... Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Jan 15, 2009 6:47 am

Beep beep..REMINDEr..!!

Aur haan jaldi se kum/sum ko beemar karo..
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:19 am

@Sonu: no beemari allowed...itni jaldi...okk :rolling on the floor:

Only three replies....anyways.... Sad:


Mamaji & Kk arrive at the station and check for the train. She is then escorted till her seat by him. Happy:

Mamaji: Acha kk, ab tere jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai, apna khayal rakhna beta…

Kk’s eyes get moist, and she hugs him tightly. Happy:

Kk: Mamaji, aapse dur jaane ka bilkul mann nahi kar raha hai…

Mamaji: Beta, agar aage badhna hai, toh tera apni manzilon se milna bhi zaroori hai…haan lekin yeh bhi yaad rakhna…ke apni manzilon ko paane ki chahat mein tu apni jadon ko naa bhul jaayein… Happy:

Kk: Mamaji, main aapki baton ko humesha yaad rakhoongi… Happy:

Mamaji blesses her and says: Acha beta, ab train chutne ka samay ho chukka hai…main chalta hoon…

He comes outside the train and Kk looks at him with moist eyes. The train starts leaving and finally they both bid adieu to each other. Happy:

Kk takes her seat, and checks all the papers she has to for the interview. She also checks the address once again. And she just closes her eyes for a while but not before locking the door.

She looks at the front seat of hers, and wonders who could be there with her at the same compartment. But then after giving a thought she just wipes it out and goes to close her eyes once again.

After some time, a person bangs her compartment with a hush, and she is awakened by the sound. The noise goes for a little long time and a louder this time, she first ignores it but then gets irritated by the noise. love struck(:

She angrily goes to open the door and blurts out saying:

Kaun hai…ohho..ruko zara…love struck(:

She opens the door and looks out for the person who was banging the door but can’t see the person; she gets irritated:angry: …and angry too and goes to close the door when she hears one voice from behind:

Thank you madam, darwaza kholne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya… :batting eyelashes:

She wonders whose voice is this and turns back to see the person who has managed to come inside the compartment. She can’t see that person because he is buzy sneaking into his luggage. :rolling on the floor:

She calls: Hello, tum andar kaise aaye, kyun aaye… :-O:

The person is still sneaking into his luggage and says: Maine reservation kiya hai toh main yehi rahoonga naa…yeh mera bhi compartment hai…:rolling on the floor:

Kk: Kya?

She says this word so loudly that the person’s luggage falls off and he turns back at her. :rolling on the floor:

Kk stands still & astonished looking at him. :batting eyelashes:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:45 am

ye pakka sumit hai na.......hona chaiye :rolling on the floor:

nice parts reshu :applause:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:57 am

haan ye toh sum hi ho sakta hai..LOL

waise mera akele ka comment 10 logon ki market value rakhta hai u know
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:09 pm

@Poorvi: U knw everything lol.gif" alt="lol!" longdesc="38" /> ...right naa..good good, :rolling on the floor: ..thnchu fr liking it :batting eyelashes:

@Sonu: Well said sweets...ur comments are priceless to me Embarassed ..thx dear Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:55 pm

Yayyyyyy..what a takkar!! :Dance: ...I just love it when ladka-ladki pehle bahuut jagarthe hai phir love struck: love struck: love struck: ...lekin knowing u Rolfy, kuchh na kuchh twist dalegi zaroor :-SS: ...I loved this part Resh, it had it all, comedy, story ka moving forward and of cos the perfect intro of a new character :Wink: ..well written yaar :applause:


Aur tu why worrying...aise saying only 3 comments jaise ke hamari teeno ki tho koi value bhi nahin BoredHappy:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Jan 16, 2009 2:06 am

BEEP BEEP ...m waiting REMINDER..

Ladai vadai theek hai..pls kumkum sumit maar-peet tak na pahunche..i dont trust u for such things
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Jan 16, 2009 2:37 am

bounce haa reshu kya part hiii itt is rocking bt phir saa chota saa
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Fri Jan 16, 2009 7:17 am

@Rahi: Thx sweets fr appreciating it :batting eyelashes: ....just let the story move ahead...and ur comments really value a lott dear... :batting eyelashes:

@Sonu: Saans toh lene deh yaar:)): ...kal pucca update karoongi...thx fr reminding and keep on doing tht!! :batting eyelashes:

@Nitz: Yeh chotusa part laga tujhe:-O: ....nways thx sweets Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:35 am

I had posted with emotions bt it got lost...

Nways here it is...

She is standing still for some more moments. A guy who is equally handsome and smart sweeps her feet in the initial stage.

The guy keeps looking at her, and he then snaps out, and clicks his fingers on her face.

Guy: Hello, hello, madam…

Kk still in a daze, the guy now becomes irritated and again clicks his fingers.

Guy: Hello madam, aise kya dekh rahi hai aap?

Kk still doesn’t move. He goes on saying:

“Kamaal hai, kaise ajeeb log mil jaate hai, maine kaha tha papa se train se nahi aaonga, lekin nahi, flights available nahi hai, toh train ka safar hi best hai, aa jaao, aise logon se paala padta hai fir, oye madam, helloooooooooo!!”

This time Kk does come out of her daze and moves to her seat.

The guy wonders about her behavior and then moves towards his seat.

Kk speaks up finally: Tameez nahi hai aapko, aise darwaza koi bajata hai kya?

The guy: Hello, tameez mujhe mat sikhaiyee…aap jo mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi, uska kya?

Kk is taken aback and feels uncomfortable about her act, but still doesn’t want to accept it.

Kk: Dekhiye Mr…

But he shrugs her off, and says: Dekho, mujhe tumse baat karne ka koi shauk nahi hai, ek toh yeh train ke safar se mujhe problem ho rahi hai, aur doosri taraf tum mera dimaag naa khao toh zyada acha hai, samjhi?

Kk wanted to say more but just stops herself.

The guy relaxes himself and goes off to sleep for a while. Here Kk too closes her eyes and starts to think of her new journey.

In the midnight hours, the guy is shaken up with some noise, and gets awake. He wonders what’s wrong!!

He sees that the lady in front of his deck is not there, so he presumes that she would have gone for washroom, and so he shrugs off by saying: “Gayi hogi kahi, shaanti se koi sone hi nahi deta”. He goes to sleep yet again but is taken aback with a noise again.

This time he goes out of his compartment to see what’s wrong, and walks down the corridor of the train.

He comes near the noise and is shocked seeing the act. He sees the lady in front of his berth shouting from top of her voice after seeing a cockroach in the washroom. Everyone is trying to relax her but she doesn’t give up. Kk just goes on and on about the issue, she says:

“Yeh train hai yaa kya, dhyaan nahi rakh sakte passengers kaa”

People try to say her that there is just a cockroach and it has gone now, but Kk is not ready to listen.

Seeing this entire drama, this guy gets impatient and shouts loudly.

“Chup karo, chup ho jao”

Kk looks at him, and again stares him for a moment.

He comes near her and says “Kya tumne tay kiya hai, ke mera safar mushkil se bhar dogi, itna bhi kya hua hai”

Kk: Kya hua, kya nahi hua, woh cockroach…

This guy stands quietly and folds his hands, and says:

Kahan hai cockroach?

Kk looks down and comes to know that she was making noise much more than required, she herself didn’t knew how she overreacted to it and disturbed everyone’s sleep!!

She looks down and says: Ab nahi hai…

Guy: Toh?

Kk: Toh…she looks at everyone and gets embarrassed. She says sorry to everyone and walks off from there. Everyone disperses from there and the guy starts walking to the compartment.

He comes in the compartment only to see that she is lying on the berth quietly.

He goes to lie on his berth.

Kk: Sorry…

Guy: Sab kuch hone ke baad…

Kk: Ab main darr gayi thi toh…

Guy: Toh sabki neend udaogi…

Kk: Sorry kaha naa…

He says: Ab so jao, aur mujhe bhi sone doh…aur ab koi tamasha mat karna…

She just nods her head, while he goes off to sleep yet again.

Kk keeps on wondering as to why she gave up so easily to this man, why she keeps on looking at him, and how could her behavior change drastically as she herself have never gave up out rightly. She keeps on thinking, looking at the man, and lies on her berth, and closes off her eyes for a serene sleep!!
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:00 am

haila..!!I want to kiss that cockroach..!!really..!!

It was woweeee..
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:51 am

damn nice.......reshu.....too gud :applause: ...........kk to first ball par hi bold ho gayi...giving up so easily.... Embarassed ............fantastic yaar :applause:

@sonu:tu cockroach ko kiss karegi :rolling on the floor:
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sat Jan 17, 2009 3:27 pm

:grin: :grin: reshu yup let mee guss the person is non other than our sumit na :shock: next part zaaldi
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:02 am

@Sonu: Thx sweets...u wanna kiss cockroach okkk...never mind....lolz

@Poo: Thx sweets...glad u liked it...

@Nitz: Haan haan likhoongi....and keep guessing....thx sweets...
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:09 pm

I am going to stop writing and am gonna start sending u reminders like sonu...

Reshu the firts convo was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :applause: :applause:...

Ab jaldi likhooooo
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PostSubject: Re: FF: Naa Jaane Kyun....!! Pg 21..Kk on a new path?   Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:33 am

@Verni: Awwwwwwwww..dear..was waiting fr u :grin: ....and pls dont stop writing love struck(: ...u write more good than me Grin: ....and yes keep on sending reminders... :rolling on the floor:
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