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Verni
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Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27)  Sat Jun 27, 2009 9:46 pm |
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Thanku bchchaaaaa... for liking it... and jhoot kahan.... it was longggg..
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Rah
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Sun Jun 28, 2009 7:04 am |
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Wowweee what a comeback Bachcha!!!..absolutely fantastic...words kam par rahe hai..thanks for the offliner btw warna I wouldnt even have known ke tune update kiya..
Just 1 thing...romantic part was toooo short yaar!!!!!  ab jaldi update karna! 
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Sun Jun 28, 2009 8:14 am |
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Rahi..... that's so sweetttt... haan haan bataongi kyun nahi??...
n next time wud update longer.. but romatic parts abhi zyaada nahi aayenge... according to the story...
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poorvi
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:16 pm |
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gr8 come back verni....awsome part
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*Resham*
Crazy Painter
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Sun Jun 28, 2009 11:47 pm |
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Whoooooooooaaaaaaa..wht a comeback verni,..loved it...
Keep it coming he he!!
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Mon Jun 29, 2009 3:30 am |
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@ poorvi : thanku bchcha....
@ reshu : Thanks for liking bchchaaaa... ya it will keep coming...
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nitya
Crazy Painter
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:50 am |
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verni wel back with a bang
yupp sach may the wait was worth
waiting fr next part
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Amrit
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:26 pm |
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yippeee..u're back ! 
now write more such romantic parts..itne se humara kuch nahi banta 
simply loved reading this verni
continue really soooooooooooooooon ok ' )'
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Wed Jul 01, 2009 6:03 am |
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@ nittu : thanku bchcha log...
@ amu : thnku bchcgaaaaaaa... achcha isse bhi zyaadaaa?
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Fri Jul 03, 2009 3:54 am |
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Sudha gets out from the auto.... pays the auto-wala and goes inside a restaurant.
She looks around and finally sees someone sitting there, she goes and sits beside the person. It’s Raj.
Sudha : Tumne mujhe itni jaldi mein kyun bulaya? Koi problem to nahi hai na?
Raj : Sudha.... maine kal Sumit se uske aur Kumkum ke baare mein poocha... usne bata bhi diya ki un dono ka pyaar kaisa shaadi mein tabdeel hua...
Sudha : Main jaanti hun aur... .... Raj... yeh sab itna pareshaan hokar kyun keh rahe ho?
Raj : Sudha yeh sab batate hue Sumit ke chehre pe ek shikan bhi nahi aayi... I mean kabhi kabhi mujhe doubt hota hai.... does he still love Kumkum coz...
Sudha : Nahi Raj... aisa nahi ho sakta hai...Raj Sumit baaki logon jaisa nahi hai... wo tumhare saamne kabhi bhi zaahir nahi hone dega ki wo kumkum se kitna pyaar karta hai... uske bina wo jee nahi raha hai... lad raha hai khudse...
Raj : Sudha tum to Sumit se kabhi mili bhi nahi ho phir... tum yeh sab?
Sudha : Haan Raj main Sumit se kabhi nahi mili par Kumkum ko to jaanti hun... use samjhati hun naa...
Raj : Main kuch samjha nahi....
Sudha : Raj do log jab ek doosre se alag hote hain to unka saath mein zindagi bitana aasan hota hai... jaise ek shant to doosra bohut bolne waala, ek gussael to doosra maskhara, I mean funloving... par jab do log ek jaise hote hain to mushkil nahi bohut mushkil hoti hai...
Raj : Matlab?
Sudha : Ohho ab hum dono ko dekho... jab main hyper hoti hun to tum sambhal lete ho... right?
Raj : right.
Sudha : Aur jaise.. jaise jab tum excessive masti karte ho main tumhara kaan pakad ke tumhe chup karke baitha deti hun... right...????
Raj (smiling sweetly) : right.
Sudha : Aur... jaise... jaise main intelligent hun aur tum dumb... right????
Raj : right.... kyaaaaaaaa???????
Sudha laughs...
Sudha : Achcha mazaak chodo... yeh batao samjhe...?
Raj : Haan... par Sudha wo dono bhi ek doosre se kaafi alag hain... I mean unki pasand...
Sudha : Tumhe aisa lagta hai unki pasand kaafi alag hai?
Raj : N... nahi... thodi hi bas... ya wo bhi nahi... hmmm ... to iska matlab wo dono ek jaise hain...
Sudha : Hmm... ab dekho do log alag honge to wo ek doosre ki kamiyon ko poora kar denge... ab jaise tumne padha hi hoga... lock and key hypothesis by Fischer... I mean ek doosre ko poora karna sahi samay aur sahi jagah pe... par Sumit aur Kumkum... yeh dono bilkul ek jaise hain... isliye m sure inme isiliye itna takraav hota hoga...kyunki yeh dono ek doosre se beinteha pyaar karte hain... par... par yeh dono hi jhukna nahi jaante... ek doosre se ladte hain, jhagdte hain, ek doosre ko takleef dete hain, chot pohunchaate hain... aur ek doosre ko jitni hi zyaada takleef dete hain utna hi zyaada pyaar badhta hain inke beech... bohut hi alag sa rishta hai inka...
Raj : Hmm.. to ab hume kya karna chahiye...?????
Sudha : Kuch nahi...
Raj : Kya????... Kuch nahi????
Sudha : Haan... kyunki hamare kuch bhi karne se kuch nahi badlega... Unhe khud karna hoga sab kuch... aur uske liye hum sab kuch karenge...
Raj : Mujhe KUCH BHI samajh nahi raha...
Sudha : Tabhi kehti hun ki tum dumb ho aur main intelligent...
Raj stares at her...
Sudha : Achcha ab ghooro mat... aur meri baat dhyaan se suno...
Hope u all like it...
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Amrit
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Fri Jul 03, 2009 7:57 am |
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ruk kyun gayi??? sudha ki baat sunayo
i loved when she said ' jaise main intelligent aur tum dumb' ' '
hope su-kk jaldi se re-realise their love for each other ')'
but im thinking who will take the first step 
continue soooon verni..
tumhe bhi henna wali aadat pad gayi hai..suspense mode pe story chodne ki ' )'
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poorvi
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Fri Jul 03, 2009 8:03 am |
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nice part verni
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*Resham*
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Fri Jul 03, 2009 8:10 am |
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nice part yaar....really why u stopped uff...
And by the way it comes on pg 24...so edit it out...okk putri...
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Sat Jul 04, 2009 4:00 am |
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@ amu : haan ladki... likhungi... actually maine bohut se episode likh ke rakkhen hain... but sab likh dungi to mazaa kya?... aur suspense ki jagah nahi chodungi to how will u wait for next part?..
@ poorvi : thanku bchchaaaaa...
@ reshu : haan baba wu dcont soon... and edited the title... okk...
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nitya
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:56 pm |
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phir sa wrong time pa u stopped verni
nice part cont soon
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-AreenA-
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:57 am |
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nice part vernooo =)
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:34 am |
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@ nittu : thanku bchchaaaa...
@ areena : can I call u aru?... thanku bchchaaaaaaaa...
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Mon Jul 13, 2009 4:48 am |
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wow amazing work.
plz continue soon.
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Sat Jul 18, 2009 8:01 am |
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wud continue soon....... after reaching my hostel...
thanx pri... bchchaaaaa
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Prii_Loves_Mohit
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Sat Jul 18, 2009 8:08 am |
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yay i cannot wait to read more.
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:08 am |
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^^ thanku bchchaaaaa
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sonalisaxena
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:13 am |
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Sorry for the very late comment di..
It was a cute part...still waiting to know KK-Su's truth...will update there as well!
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:38 am |
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“Nahi.”.....
Says Kumkum plainly and blankly.
“Nahi!!!”
Says Raj surprised.
“Nahi???”
Says Sudha questioning Kumkum
“NAHI”
Says Sumit angrily...
“Nahi..... aur mujhe lagta bhi nahi ki Sumit haan karega....” Says Raj to Sudha .
Sudha : Ek kaam nahi hota tumse... tumhe Sumit ko manana hoga .... Is trip pe dono ka jaana
zaruri hai... tabhi hum aage kuch kar paayenge... kyunki aise alag rehkar yeh dono kuch nahi karenge aur na hi hamare kuch bhi karne ka faayda hoga...
Raj : Hello.. ma’am... mera Sumit to phir bhi maan jaayega... apni Kumkum ko manane ki socho...
Sudha : Meri kumkum???? Kya matlab kya hai tumhara?...Tum aise kaise baat kar rahe ho?... aur waise bhi ek maanega to doosra khud hi maan jaayega...
Raj : wo kyun?
Sudha : Unka pyaar hi aisa hai... khair kuch bhi karo bas Sumit ko manao... main kuch nahi
jaanti... Kumkum ko kaise manana hai yeh maine soch liya hai...
She smiles naughtily...
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“Aaaaaaaaaaa.......... Aaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnhaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnn......”
Sudha was crying loudly....
Kumkum enters the house... and keeps the bag at a table... and goes to Sudha...
Kumkum : Kya hua Sudha?... tu aise kyun ro rahi hai...?... aur... aur ye ... ye doctor yahan kya kar rahe hain...
The guy was sitting with a stethoscope... and a labcoat.
Doc : Dekhiye... inka CP badha hua hai...
Kumkum : CP?
Sudha hits his leg below the table...
Doc : BP... I means BP... My mishtakes...
Kumkum (strangely luking at him) : Ohh...
Doc : Aap... sirf aap inhe bacha sakti hain... warna inki zindagi mein ghanghor andhera chaa jaayega..sirf aap inki lives mein happy and bright sun banke aa sakti hain...
Kumkum (confused) : Jee...???
Sudha hits again...
Doc : Looks.... inhe environment changes ki zarurat hai... aap inhe kuch dino ke liye baahar le jaaiye... ghumiye ghumaaiye... aish kariye... yeh chaar din ki zindagi hai babu mushaaye.... phir nahi lautegi... pushpaaaaaaaa....
Kumkum : Hunhhhh
Sudha (pissing off her teeth): Doctor sahab aap agar kaam ki baat bole to koi problem...
Doc : Ohh yess... dekhiye aap kuch din ke liye inhe baahar le jaaiye... inki tabiyat apne aap theek ho jaayegi...khushiyaan yunhi nahi milti... unhe paana hota hai... apni zindagi mein laana
hota hai... aur..
Sudha (irritatingly still smiling) : Bassss... basss doctor sahab aapki madad ka bohut bohut shukriya... ab aapko chalna chahiye... hai naa...
Doc : Ohh yess... Sures... Byes... and takes care...
Kumkum(luking at him going) : Are u sure tune doctor hi bulaya tha?
Sudha (to herself) : Yeh to Raj hi jaane...
Kumkum : Raj... kaun Raj...? kya kaha tune?
Sudha :R... Raj... Raj hi to hai wo jiski wajah se aaj meri yeh halat hai... he is cheating on me.... Kumkum main kya karun???
Kumkum (blankly) : Wo tujhe cheat kar raha h... aur tu uski liye ro rahi h....
Sudha : Kumkum main pyaar karti....
Kumkum (plainly) : Kick him out of ur life.... isse zyaada main kuch nahi kar sakti....
Sudha luks at her shocked...
Kumkum gets up and starts going inside...
Sudha : K.. Kum.. Kumkum kar sakti hai...I mean tu kar sakti hai mere liye kuch... plzz mere saath kuch din ke liye ghoomne chal.... plzzzzzz ...... plzzzz... plz plz plz plz plz.......
Kumkum turns ...
Kumkum : Kahan chalna hai?
“Mussoorie......???????”
Says Sumit turning,
Sumit : Raj Mussoorie mein kaunsa resort kholna hai tujhe... aur tu wahan kyun.....
Raj (cutting him off) : Sumit Mussoorie se mera purana aur barson ka rishta hai.... mere greatgrandfather ke greatgrandfather ki mother ke brother ne wahan janm liya tha... n unki ek ichcha thi ki wo wahan ek bada sa resort kholen..
Sumit (luk at him for sometime n then smiles slowly) : logon se kareebi ek do rishte sambhaale nahi jaate aur tu kahan ka relation leke baitha hai....
Raj : ab rishta hai ... to hai... kuch doori aane se tootega to nahi...
Sumit stops doing his work...
Raj : Aur waise bhi rishte todne ke liye to nahi hote...
Sumit looks at him sharply
Raj : Ermmm... mera matlab... wo...
Sumit : Kab chalna hai?...
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Hope u all like it...
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Verni
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:39 am |
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@ thanku sonu... yeah ur wait will get over...
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marshtric
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| Subject: Re: FF : O Saathi Re...(Meeting after long tym.... Pg 27) Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:16 am |
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Nice work...
keep on doing
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